L'aura del Campo

A plea re reviews/comments

I responded to runningwolf04 but cut and post here instead.

I believe your poll

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refers to prose. Poets want something else.

1. Did you like it?

2. Can you offer any advice to strengthen it poetically.

DO NOT:

3. Correct my grammar/spelling when I'm speaking in dialect.

4. Treat it as if it's a college or grade school essay or report.

ADVICE:

5. If you have never written poetry or are tone-deaf and refuse to read it out-loud, do me a favor... don't review it. Send a comment instead. Comments are welcome.

6. If your only experience is English-only-speaking MidAmerica and my writing isn't... and that offends you or confuses you, don't review. But please leave a comment so I know.

I appreciate comments/reviews by tight-form experts (oriental, short forms) like Tinker or free-flowing (beatnik) verse experts like Mom DID NOT get me tested, BKC. There are others who are experts in their chosen field. My poetic offerings lose to them all the time. But... if you're a novel-writer don't bother lecturing me on haiku... because I know you don't have a clue.

K (as in Cory)

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