- a challenge - 52 short stories in 52 weeks...something must be worth reading, right? |
She was impossible to miss. Hair of fire. Eyes like emeralds. I took a deep breath, composed myself, and approached her table. “Hello,” I smiled. “You look familiar. Have we met before?” She looked up from her novel; those emeralds flashing with irritation at the disturbance. “No. You’re mistaken.” There was a tinge of an accent. Lovely. I was not deterred. I sat across her. She lowered her book; a frown creasing her brow. “What do you-?” I raised a hand. “Brentwood High. Class of 97. We figured we’d run off after graduation and live out the rest of our days traveling the world.” “Now look here-” “Unfortunately, I realized the love was one-sided. I gave so much of myself and yet nothing seemed to make you happy. I could just never please you, could I?” Her lips parted to interrupt, but I continued; the memories tumbling over themselves to seek precedence. “Remember all those arguments we used to have? How you’d sometimes call me a loser just because I wasn’t as rich as some of my buddies? And don’t think I didn’t see the way you used to salivate over Brian whenever he came over. Christ, when I found out you two hooked up eventually, that was the final straw.” I took another deep breath and felt the invisible weight of her burden flung off my shoulder in an instant. I rose to my feet with a grin. “I wish you all the best, Debbie, and I truly hope you find happiness someday.” I left her staring in disbelief, but not before hearing her friend return to their table to ask just what the hell that was all about. “The oddest one-sided conversation ever," ‘Debbie’ replied. “Anyway, let’s leave before he returns and assumes I’m another ex of his.” -------------- Winning Entry ![]() Word Count: 300 Prompt: Write a story that includes the line: “You look familiar.” Written For: "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge" ![]() |