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The Prince is now King.

#1090738 added June 4, 2025 at 9:16pm
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Chapter Eight: Masks And Mirrors


Chapter Eight: Masks and Mirrors

The forest south of Thalen had always been dense. Trees pressed close like secrets, their branches clawing at the sky. The path was narrow, barely more than a game trail. Caelan walked it alone.

By choice.

He had left the guards behind. Even Lyra. This invitation wasn’t made to a king, or a councilor.

It was made to a man.

To him.

The scroll’s message burned in his pocket: “The mask is not the face. Come see what lies beneath.”

He followed the path for miles. No sounds but birds and wind. And then, as dusk fell, he saw them.

Two masked figures stepped from the trees.

No weapons drawn. No words spoken.

Caelan held up his hands. “I’m here.”

They nodded.

And turned.



The Circle Beneath

They led him down an overgrown trail to a hollow beneath the hill — a hidden circle of stone, long buried and forgotten by all but those who had lived in shadow.

Dozens gathered there.

All masked.

They formed a ring around a bonfire. Soft drums pulsed in the background — slow, like a heartbeat.

Then one figure stepped forward.

His mask was different.

Painted silver, cracked down the center.

And though Caelan hadn’t seen his face in years, he knew.

“Sareth.”

The masked man removed the covering.

And there he was.

Older. Sharper. But unmistakably his brother.

“Hello, Cael,” Sareth said.

Caelan froze. “You said you died.”

“I let them believe I had,” Sareth replied. “It made you safer. For a time.”

A beat passed between them. Long. Loaded.

“You’ve built a rebellion.”

“I’ve built a mirror,” Sareth said calmly. “And held it up to your kingdom.”



What Lies Beneath

They sat across from one another on flat stones. The fire flickered between them, throwing long shadows across the circle.

Sareth’s voice was quiet.

“I never hated what you were building. I hated that you thought you could build it from above. That you still thought it had to start with you.”

“I stepped down from the throne.”

“You kept the chair,” Sareth said. “You just renamed it.”

Caelan clenched his jaw. “And this is your answer? Burning cities? Masked mobs?”

“They’re not mobs. They’re the people. The ones who were promised a voice and were given a vote — every five years, filtered through a council chamber they can’t enter.”

Caelan wanted to argue. But he knew the truths Sareth touched were not hollow.

“I thought you were dead,” he said instead.

Sareth looked away. “For a while, so did I.”



The True Choice

That night, the masked movement held a gathering in the hollow.

No names were spoken.

Each person, when they stepped forward, removed their mask and told their story.

A mother whose son died in the mines of Kaelven, buried in a shaft collapsed under royal oversight.

A healer from the Eastern isles, denied practice because she refused to swear loyalty to the High Council.

A former guard, cast out for protecting a protestor instead of arresting him.

Caelan listened.

He didn’t speak.

At the end, Sareth turned to him.

“We don’t want to destroy your council. We want to replace it.”

Caelan stood slowly.

“You want me to abdicate.”

“No,” Sareth said. “We want you to choose. You can try to save the old world — or help us birth the new one.”

A hush fell.

Caelan’s eyes swept the firelit circle.

Faces unmasked.

Eyes honest.

He saw something he hadn’t felt in months — maybe years.

Hope.

Not for him.

From him.

He stepped forward.

“I’ll come back to the capital. I’ll call a vote.”

Sareth arched an eyebrow. “Of the people?”

Caelan nodded. “Kingdom-wide. Every town. Every voice. They choose: the Council, or a new Assembly. No violence. No thrones.”

A beat passed.

Then Sareth extended his hand.

“Then let the kingdom decide.”



At the Edge of History

As Caelan prepared to leave Thalen, Sareth walked with him to the edge of the woods.

“You always feared the weight,” Sareth said.

“I still do.”

“And yet you carry it.”

Caelan looked up at the night sky. “It’s not about me anymore.”

Sareth smiled faintly. “It never was.”

They embraced — the kind that comes after long wounds.

Then Caelan turned and walked into the trees, toward the fate he had once run from.

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