OctoPrep 2025

Plot Outline Revision #3

Assignment #29

"Oct. 29 - "Outline Revision #3:"

"Plot: Outline Revision #3"

(1) Review your plot elements thus far and organize them into your outline.
(2) Fill in any gaps in your outline template and/or flesh out more details.


The time has come for Adelaide to begin her journey. She is brought to Lady Althena's home where everything is fully explained to her.

After being brought up to speed, she is to go see Lady Althena's son, Dane. It is here she is introduced to him and understands that Lady Althena isn't the witch, her son is and that she has been covering for him.

Adelaide's friend, Mihaela Roxana, finds out that the time has finally come for Adelaide's journey and that she wants to join her. She has her bow and arrow.

Heading towards the Vala Range, their first stop is in a small town outside of the Caelkirk Kingdom, called Bearglen. The next day when they prepare to leave, they meet Muriel Iyana, a fai or elemental summoner.

They make a stop at a religious village, Edgespell. They meet with the priests there and a small group of Paladins who are there to protect the priests and the village. They talk with one specifically, Gideon Amari, who is feeling doubt about his place and joins Adelaide.

After making a small camp in a thicket, they are attacked by a small group of beasts. Come to realize that Adelaide's childhood friend, Mihaela had a hand in it. She is killed.

Adelaide is taken and the crew goes after to find her.

They find the camp where the beasts and others came from. They rescue Adelaide.

As they come up on on the Vala Range, they discuss what is to happen and how Adelaide must maneuver River Passea.

Muriel Iyana finds out that she has Orophobia when the Vala mountains come into view. She was unaware she has this phobia.

The night before they head to River Passea, Adelaide has a panic attack.

Adelaide enters River Passea, meets with Nadite and is told of three challenges she must win to reach the entrance to Vala.

Adelaide fails the second challenge. Nadite shakes her head and uses her power to expel Adelaide from the river.

While Adelaide is still alive, she soon dies shortly after. The group brings her body back to Shimmerwood.

Lady Althena mentions that while she was wrong, she just picked the wrong one. Mentions that Adelaide was a twin and that her sister was put in a safe place.

Plans are made to bring her twin to their realm.