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about 8 hours ago
In response to "A Moment In Time"

I bet you will do well with the cleave! After you mentioned it a while back, I went searching and found two failures in my port (set to private) written long ago. Might have to revive and rewrite. Or not ... haha haha

a day ago
In response to "A Moment In Time"

ßlυҽყҽʐ 🤍 - I'm having fun working my way through her mini-encyclopedia of forms. And one day I will have a go at the cleave!

a day ago
In response to "A Moment In Time"

After reading your poem and then Bianca's poem, I was impressed how well the mirror effect works on both pieces for making sense. Well done.

Apr 16, 2025 at 10:27am
In response to "Waiting"

Hey... that's something to try! Thanks

Apr 16, 2025 at 9:25am
In response to "Waiting"

ßlυҽყҽʐ 🤍 - Once I'd picked a form to play with, I started with the ending and then had to sweat to try to back-fill it. I went through quite a few candidate "repeat" words before settling on this set!

Apr 16, 2025 at 9:19am
In response to "Waiting"

Nice job with the form and wild card! Still working on one myself. I keep ending up with resolution!

Apr 16, 2025 at 8:40am
In response to "Waiting"

Amethyst Angel 💐

- Dark is one genre I seem to do ok with. Nonsense is another. It's all the rest that cause me problems...

Amethyst Angel 💐

Apr 16, 2025 at 7:46am
In response to "Waiting"

Good work here. I find it hard to write dark poetry without being either entirely overblown or feeling like I'm just glueing together randomly gloomy words.

Apr 12, 2025 at 11:23am
In response to "Scratch, Scratch, Scratch Your Head (a round for 4 voices)"

: I forgot about them - it might have thinned the herd down a bit, especially with the last few lines.

Apr 12, 2025 at 8:52am
In response to "Scratch, Scratch, Scratch Your Head (a round for 4 voices)"

That's crazy! I use 'indents' when a lot of blank space is needed. Cuts down the ML, but it can still get confusing when it comes to editing.