Thank you for that, Kiya - it's not many brave the wilds of my portfolio to discover my little 8-line poems, so it's wonderful to have some feedback on them. Much appreciated!
Wonderful poem that links footprints to bits and pieces of our memories over the years.
As we get older, we do leave a mark behind - footprints if you will - and even as they fade away, they'll always linger and be a reminder of what we once were.
Thanks for sharing this poignant piece with us, and keep on writing!
In that first moment when I awake,
the dream fades with the shades of night,
all that was clear and accepted
is now scattered and chaotic,
the shreds of meaning torn by the dawn,
and I am left befuddled and cold,
mourning in the dim light of morning,
bereft of another world’s charms.
Line count: 8
Free verse
For Express It In Eight, 05.01.25
Prompt: Include the emboldened phrase in your poem.
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