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Dec 16, 2022 at 1:45am
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Re: Commentary: "Betrayals, Backstabs, and Possible Boyfr...
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Well, I can say one very positive thing about this branch.

It has a solid physical description and a little bit of the attitude of Lisa Rickover. Definitely she's not like I imagined her, though now I visually compare her with Eva Garner. (She's the one with the blonde bob, right?)

But yeah - I can see that it was kinda forced and pushed, rather than evolving naturally. Maybe it's because Cody's not exactly a choice that Chelsea could use - her reaction to "wait, who!?" kinda expresses your reaction.
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Commentary: "Betrayals, Backstabs, and Possible Boyfriends" · 12-12-22 2:30pm
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