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Even though the idea was already there, thank you for writing these chapters Seuzz. They were excellent and this branch has been a blast to read.

One of the things that really stuck out to me is when Chelsea was talking to Will about staying in high school because she's good at it and Will wanting to leave because he's bad at it, that's not exactly true. Will is the one who started from the very bottom and is now sitting at the very pinnacle of the social structure. Sure, he couldn't use looks to get there like Chelsea but he used magic, his brain, and luck. Will is the one who "won" in high school.

I also like that there's so many different avenues this branch can go down now. Cindy didn't even return so that's something that can be explored later on (how she's dealing with her break up with "Seth" and now his relationship with "Kelsey"). You could even fast forward 5, 10, 15 years into the future (like Wandering Stars) where Will and Chelsea are still in high school or found lives they both wanted to keep or took over a pair of parents/teachers or whatever.