This choice: “Mom, you want some more pancakes? I’m completely full” • Go Back...Chapter #6Pancakes, mother? by: Matheson   “Mom, you want some more pancakes? I’m completely full”, Tulip asks. Your mother with a look of concern on her face as she looks at Tulip. "You barely touched them. Are you okay, sweetie?", she asks. "Just not that hungry this morning, is all", Tulip says. Without further ado, she gets up and heads out of the room (but not before screeching the chair back against the table).
"She's such a strange one..." Your mother says, looking at Tracy. There is an awkward silence in the air as Tracy just shrugs and drinks her orange juice. "Well. You and I can finish it off, I suppose", your mother says. Tracy takes a moment to finish off her drink, before responding with "sorry, mom, but I've got work today. Got to go before I'm late."
Tracy grabs her plate, dumps it into the sink quickly, and quickly rushes out. "You've still got some ti...", your mother starts to say, but Tracy leaves the room before she can finish her sentence.
Your mother sighs, staring at you. Well, the pancakes, which you are currently a part of. She grabs the plate and slides you over to her. You see how all of this is going to play out in your head. She'll try to eat the pancake and find Tulip's surprise after a few bites in. You could save yourself a few minutes of this ridiculousness if the syrup hadn't sealed your mouth shut.
You try to look up at your mother's face, but her breasts obscure your view. She then picks up a nearby fork and knife and the pancake around you rumbles. There is the telltale clanking of silverware against plate, and the knife comes down nearby as she starts cutting up the pancake. She cuts two... three... four times and luckily miss you every time (though you had to move your arm for the second cut to avoid you).
Slowly you see the fork dragging away the strips of pancake off the plate. The only sound you can hear is the squishy smacks of your mother's lips and tongue on the pancakes and the gulp as she sends them down her throat.
She gulps down another strip and you feel the push down as you are now lifted off the plate. 'Here we go' you think as you look outward. You can finally see your mother's face come into view, her face is nonchalant as she brings you closer. Her mouth opens widely and you get a full view inside. You can see the saliva coating on every surface inside, and dread the part coming up. Her uvula bobs slightly and her tongue slides out of her mouth as she slides you and the pancake inside.
What happens next?
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