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kids shrink during their family barbeque and have to escape their oblivious relatives

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Chapter #8

... right around Olivia's feet

    by: Lexy88 Author IconMail Icon
Megan and Blake stand in horror between the feet of their mother and Olivia. Olivia is nearly crushing them with each of her spasms of movement while their mother occasionally scrunches her toes or rocks back on her heels slightly, exposing the bottom of her toes and ball of her foot. when Sandra does this the first time, Megan and Blake can see some of the remains of their brother still stuck to her foot.

they hear Sandra's monstrous voice telling Olivia to kick her sandals off and get scared. Olivia's massive feet kick and her first sandal nearly squishes Megan upon landing. a loud THUD echos as the children are thrown to their backs. Olivia then kicks her other sandal and it goes flying. She runs off to retrieve it, leaving Megan and Blake to deal with their mom at her feet. While she waits for Olivia to return, Sandra mindlessly sweeps her foot across the grass. Little does she know she is actually kicking her two remaining children in the head with the side of her foot and causing them to roll around from the whirlwind she is creating. At one point she very light scrunches a small section of grass in her toes and picks up Blake before releasing.

"MOMMY! MOM WE'RE DOWN HERE! RIGHT HERE! LOOK! STOP HURTING BLAKE!" Megan screams, but her mom hears and sees nothing. Just then Sandra releases the grass and her son from her grip. Megan begins hitting her mom's pedicured toes, but it doesn't do anything. Blake, finally being released, stumbles backwards in a daze.

As he is stumbling, Olivia is creating an earthquake as she is jogging back from getting her sandal. In his daze, Blake falls down onto his butt. He looks over and realizes that his cousin is headed right back for him. after Olivia's short jog she slows down and takes a few last steps at a walking pace to get back to her spot. "OLIVIA NO!!!!!" Blake screams but it does nothing. Olivia's next step takes her enormous foot and slams it down on top of Blake. She then twists on the foot 90degrees in order to face Sandra again. Megan watched in horror as her other brother was crushed underneath another foot.

The two continue talking for another minute, both unaware they have taken a life of someone they cared about. Sandra looks over and sees that the food is done and this excites Olivia. She begins to rock back and forth on her heel and ball, exposing what remains of Blake to Megan. Olivia then doing high-knees in excitement of eating and smashes Blake's remains even more. She runs off to get some food and Megan must think quickly before something else happens. She sees far above that Sandra, her mother, is turning to greet more guests and get some food herself, so she jumps on Sandra's toe and holds on for dear life. now she...
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