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Chapter #4

Sneak Into an Orca pen at someplace

    by: Kurama Author IconMail Icon
John’s boots squelched softly against the damp concrete as he crept along the edge of the orca enclosure, the cool night air thick with the briny scent of saltwater and the faint, metallic tang of chlorinated pools. The aquarium’s backlot was a labyrinth of shadows—hulking filtration tanks humming like distant engines, coiled hoses snaking across the ground, and the occasional flicker of moonlight on rippling water. He kept low, his breath coming in measured puffs, heart hammering not just from fear now, but from that electric buzz of anticipation. This wasn’t some sterile lab dissection or grainy documentary footage; this was real, raw, the kind of immersion that could turn his essay into something professors whispered about in hallways. Male orca anatomy—dorsal fins, reproductive structures, the sheer scale of it all—up close, it would be groundbreaking. Or at least, grade-saving.
He edged closer to the main pen, a vast oval of deep blue-black water ringed by viewing platforms and safety barriers that now loomed like silent sentinels in the dark. The surface was deceptively calm, broken only by lazy swells that lapped against the walls with a rhythmic slap-slap-slap. John paused behind a stack of empty fish crates, their wooden slats rough under his palms as he steadied himself. In the distance, a low, resonant whistle pierced the night—a call from one of the pod, echoing off the enclosure’s high walls. Kael, the big male, was out there somewhere, patrolling the depths with that effortless power John had only read about. Orcas could hold their breath for minutes, surfacing with explosive grace. He needed to see it, to observe the details: the genital slit, the claspers if visible, the way the body arched and gleamed. His notebook was already out, pencil poised, the waterproof camera slung around his neck like a talisman.
Minutes stretched into what felt like hours as he waited, the chill seeping through his jacket, making his muscles tense. Doubt flickered—maybe this was stupid, maybe he should bail before a security sweep caught him. But then, a subtle shift in the water: a swirl, a bubble trail rising like champagne fizz. John’s eyes widened, locking on the center of the pool. The surface bulged, parting slowly as a massive black-and-white form ascended from the abyss. First, the blowhole crested, expelling a misty plume that hung in the air like fog, carrying the warm, fishy exhale that made John’s nose wrinkle. Then the head emerged, sleek and rounded, eyes like polished obsidian glinting under the security lights—intelligent, assessing, as if the orca knew he was there.
Kael rose further, water cascading off his glossy skin in shimmering sheets, revealing the iconic white eye patches and the powerful jawline. His dorsal fin sliced through next, towering nearly six feet, slightly curved from years in captivity, a testament to the debates John had skimmed in his research. The orca’s body followed, arching gracefully, the underbelly pale and smooth, muscles rippling beneath the surface like coiled ropes. There—amid the flow of water—it was visible: the male anatomy, the elongated genital slit parting slightly as he exhaled again, the structures within hinted at in the low light, raw and primal. John’s breath caught; this was it, the detail no book could capture, the living biology that made his pulse race with a mix of academic hunger and sheer awe. Kael hovered at the surface for a moment, his fluke barely breaking the water, before sinking back with a gentle swirl, vanishing into the depths as quietly as he’d appeared.
John froze, pencil hovering over the page, the image burned into his mind. The rush hit him then—not just relief, but something deeper, a spark of genuine passion igniting amid the desperation. Sneaking in here? It wasn’t just for the grade anymore. It felt… right. Alive in a way cramming in the library never did. He scribbled furiously, details pouring out: the texture of the skin, the precise curve of the fin, the fleeting glimpse of anatomy that would make his essay sing. But as the water stilled once more, he realized he wasn’t ready to leave. Not yet.
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