This choice: You broke far too easily. You're his meal now! • Go Back...Chapter #10You broke far too easily. You're his meal now! by: VictimOfChoice   "You pathetic little slave, I wanted you to be broken but not this easily broken!" Jake said, "I can't have a slave that can be easily broken, I have no purpose for you now but to serve me!" He said with an evil smile.
With that Jake lifts you out over his mouth. You struggle trying to be let free, but it doesn't do avail. Jake tosses you in the air and lets you free-fall right into his mouth. The moment you landed inside, his teeth slammed shut, sealing your fate. You try to get but always fall when Jake moved his tongue.
Your world suddenly shifted when you slipped and started to fall into his throat. You fall head first into the throat. Before you can get out, Jake swallows. Your head is grabbed and pulled into his endless esophagus. You panic but Jake swallows again, and this time it takes your whole body.
On the outside, Jake places his hand on his neck, feeling the slow moving bulge that is you. He smiles as you vanish into his chest. He gives off an evil smile and looks down at his stomach, knowing of your fate.
Inside, you try to scream and panic, but all your efforts make Jake happy. Eventually you reach the stomach sphincter. You push your arms and legs out to grip the esophagus. You try all your efforts to stop from falling into Jake's stomach, but atleast to no avail. The wet esophagus prevents you from having a grip, and so, you slowly enter the sphincter. You poke your head into the dark red room. From what you can see is some acids and what left of food. But before you can get a full view, your grip fails and you fall headfirst into Jake's stomach. The impact caused a ripple inside, to Jake he felt a bit of a pain, but to him he knew that you finally arrived.
You pick yourself up and start to wander around. You stop at the acid rim that lead to the gastric lake of Jake's lower stomach. You back up and fall into some gunk. You get up and yell in disgust.
Without warning, the chamber starts to rumble violently, you hear Jake's voice, "Well slave, This is your home now! Oh wait, you won't last that long either way! I hope you enjoy my stomach while you last!" Jake said while pounding his stomach. Jake laid back in his car, shirtless letting the sun warm up your prison. While on the inside, the heat of the inside along with the sun's heat from the outside makes it much worse. Though with the sun shining in, you were able to get abit more light inside. You look around the dimly lit stomach. You gather some supplies to see if you survive and get through Jake's digestive system, but the thought of what he said being easily broken has crossed your mind. You wander close to the acid lake, you realize in a matter of hours or minutes Jake's stomach will digest you. So It was either fight and get out of Jake alive or finally admit defeat and sacrifice yourself to Jake.  indicates the next chapter needs to be written. |
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