(That last chapter was just so bad that I couldn't even get through it. Usually, I can look past the illiteracy on this website, but not this time. The following is my rewrite of the last chapter, but this time literate.)
Heather looked down and saw you the Cookie. She mistakes you for a bug and flinches back with a grossed out look on her face. She then realizes it's you and leans in with squint eyes. "Adam, is that you?" She asks, looking at you with a big smile on her face.
"Yes, can you help me?" You ask, looking up at her giant eyes.
"Sure Adam." She says picking you up between her two fingers. She puts the cookie back down on the counter and starts to walk to the bathroom, looking at you between her thumb and fore finger the entire time. She walks into the bathroom and locks the door behind her. "Nobody will be able to see us in here." This frightens you a little bit. You start to get the feeling she wouldn't bring you to your mom or aunt.
"How did you get so small?" She asks. You tell her that you don't know. You notice that she hasn't stopped smiling as she looks down at you. You start to get a little worried. "What?" You ask
"You're cute." She says. Your face turns red. You know this is wrong, but a small part of you was actually beginning to like this. "You're mouth was kinda cool." You tell her. You didn't think it was possible, but her smile actually got bigger. "Do you want me to maybe... put you back in there?" It was crazy, but you actually wanted to go back in there. "Okay." You say with a red face. "But please don't eat me."
She nods her head and lifts you up to her mouth. She opens it and breast hot air on you. She teases you with her tongue before squeezing you through her lips. She kept her mouth open and let you walk around on her tongue. It's smelt like cookies. You lay down on her tongue and kiss it. She giggles and licks up you a few times, covering you in spit. You then walk over to her throats and look down it. You get a crazy idea. "Heather, you can swallow me."
"What?" Heather says before spitting you out into her hand. "You can swallow me now." You say to her. "You're crazy!" She tells you. "Heather please, I'll be fine." You plead. You can see it in her eyes that she really wanted to swallow you. She lets out a sign. "Okay, you'll be fine." She then eagerly puts you back in her mouth. She plays with you with her spit for a while before swallowing you down her throat.
You fall in her stomach. The acid stings for a while, but then it stops. "How is it in there Adam?"
"It's Kinda slimy, but I like it down here." You say as you get use to the pool of acid and await the ride.
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