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Rated: 18+ · Interactive · Sci-fi · #1503197

Your crew gets stuck on a planet of giants. How do you survive?

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Chapter #9

Mark the Magnificant's Inside Show

    by: Deanthrocyte1 Author IconMail Icon
The tongue beneath you writhes so much that you struggle to maintain your aim at the giant stripper's throat. The last rays of outside light gets cut off as the mouth finally closes. It's now impossible to find your target in the darkness; but that's the least of your worries.

You feel something rise above you. The floor starts to become an incline as you feel the pools of saliva slide down it. You're being swallowed!

You try to keep your grip on the tongue and your pistol; but it's no use. There's not enough of a grip to keep you from sliding. As you try and wrench your hand around some potential handhold; you too get carried by the saliva. In a second, your efforts are in vain as you pass through the giant stripper's throat and get carried off by his esophagus.

The muscles hug you close as you keep descending deeper and deeper inside him. But it doesn't last. As soon as the squeezing stops; you fall into a pile of what was once hamburger. The surface is thick and viscous ; and you struggle on all fours not to sink into it.

You hear faint crying. "Is someone in here?"

"Captain? You too? I guess were doomed now..."

You try to boost morale. "No, it's not over." It's a lie and you know it. "I saw two go into his mouth. Where's the other?"

"She sunk into the ground. I'm trying to get her out, but...I can't hear her. She's not screaming for me..."

Something rumbles above you as something pours into the giant stripper's stomach. It sounds like water, but the smell and hiss while it splashes into the rising digestion lake tell you something else "Cola...Damn, the more he drinks; the more we'll sink!"

More rumbling comes from above as something larger got swallowed, and will join you in his stomach...
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