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An omnipotent entity toys with the fabric of reality.

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Chapter #5

await the next part of the message

    by: tgcaps977 Author IconMail Icon
The tension in the suburban home in Columbus, Ohio, hung heavy as the live broadcast continued, the television screen dominating the cozy living room with an air of impending doom. The family of three sat frozen, still reeling from the shocking mandate delivered with unyielding authority, their minds a storm of disbelief and defiance as they processed the plan that threatened their very identities.

On the screen, the president paused, her gaze intensifying as if reaching through the camera to address each citizen personally, her voice dropping to a commanding tone that seemed to vibrate through the airwaves. "This transformation will strip away outdated divisions and forge a nation of strength. Resources and processes will be deployed to ensure a seamless transition. Resistance will not be tolerated." A brief silence followed, the weight of her words pressing down, before she delivered the final, decisive statement. "And now, you all become female."

As those words echoed through the speakers, a strange, electric tingle surged through the air, a manifestation of power rippling across the nation with instantaneous effect. Reality shimmered within the household, an unseen force bending their very essence, a wave of transformation triggered by the declaration. The television flickered briefly, as if struggling under the weight of the change, and a warm, tingling sensation spread from the core of each family member, reshaping their bodies with startling speed, a process both painless and inescapable, guided by an influence beyond their comprehension to align with a new vision.

The father felt it first, the warmth enveloping him like a sudden fever, his robust frame softening as if melting into a new mold. His broad shoulders narrowed, height shrinking slightly to a more average stature, muscles honed by years of labor smoothing into a leaner, more delicate build. His short hair lengthened into a practical bob, strands brushing against his neck in an alien way, framing a face where rugged features morphed into a feminine contour—cheekbones higher, jawline softer, though his intense eyes retained their spark. His worn work shirt and jeans, symbols of grit, morphed into a casual denim jacket over a simple beige blouse and fitted black pants, blending past ruggedness with a new, softer form. His hands—once thick and calloused—slimmed, fingers trembling as they touched a narrower waist, the sensation of fabric against unfamiliar curves sending a jolt of shock through him. His breath hitched, a higher-pitched gasp escaping as he stumbled back into his seat, the frame creaking under a lighter weight. The change was complete in moments, leaving a profound sense of wrongness, a body no longer reflecting the life he’d known, stripped away by a force he couldn’t fight.

The mother’s transformation was subtler, her existing form already aligned with the mandate’s goal, but the wave refined her essence to fit a specific vision. Her frame remained largely unchanged, but her hair gained a polished sheen, styled into loose, elegant waves that framed her face with newfound sophistication. Her eyes sharpened slightly, a hint of assertiveness flickering within them, as if an inner resolve had been honed. Her everyday casual wear shifted into a tailored cardigan over a floral dress, the fabric softer and more refined, accentuating a gentle femininity she hadn’t emphasized before. She felt a rush of clarity, a strange warmth settling over her, though the sight of her loved ones’ changes gripped her with dread. Her hands reached to her chest, then dropped, realizing her body was mostly the same, yet the altered attire and subtle shift in bearing made her feel like a slightly different version of herself, touched by something beyond understanding.

The son’s change was the most striking, the wave hitting with a force that made him gasp aloud. His tall, gangly frame softened into a delicate, shorter build, teenage awkwardness replaced by a more petite structure, as if his very bones reshaped. His hair grew into long, straight locks cascading past his shoulders, brushing against his back in an invasive way, while freckles dotted a now softer face with fuller lips and wider, more expressive eyes. His casual, baggy clothes morphed into a pastel lavender sweater and denim skirt, paired with white sneakers, a youthful, feminine style clashing violently with his self-image. His hands flew to his chest, then face, feeling unfamiliar contours, his voice cracking into a higher pitch as he stammered in protest, the words barely coherent. The physical loss of traits he was just beginning to define hit like a blow, legs wobbling as he sank to the couch, the skirt’s fabric an alien sensation against skin. The world he knew collapsed, replaced by something unrecognizable in mere seconds.

Reality shimmered further, a subtle adjustment aligning the world to this new truth, though original memories lingered, creating a jarring duality in their minds. On the wall, familiar images altered—worksite scenes now showed a different role, sports photos became something else entirely, reflecting a history that wasn’t theirs yet was. The room itself seemed unchanged, yet a faint hum lingered, as if the air bore the weight of an unseen force. A transformed voice, higher but unsteady, cut through the silence with lingering grit. "What just happened? This isn’t... us!" Hands shook, touching new fabric, feeling hair against neck, shock and anger warring in a gaze that darted to the others. Another voice, softer yet trembling, responded, stepping closer. "I can’t believe this. Look at you both..." Eyes welled, seeing distress mirrored back. A third, even higher voice broke, face burning with shame. "I hate this! I’m not supposed to be like this!" Tears fell, hands hiding features that felt wrong.

The broadcast rolled on, the speaker’s image looming as her voice pressed forward. "This is the first step. Embrace the change, for it is our strength." For this family, the physical reshaping was a brutal reality, their forms no longer their own, a violation enacted in an instant. But the deeper struggle, the battle for their thoughts and sense of self, loomed just beyond this moment of shock. How would they face a world that had rewritten their very bodies, and what force would shape their minds next?
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