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Rated: 13+ · Interactive · Romance/Love · #159503

When best of friends have to choose between frienship and love

This choice: Does Hannah get her man?  •  Go Back...
Chapter #4

One Step Further

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It was finally time. Hannah was wearing her beautiful dress and had set the table, cooked a lovely, formal meal, and as she finished with her makeup and hair, she heard him ring the doorbell. She quickly ran to the door and answered.
She saw Luis there. He had changed into casual clothes and appeared to have taken shower.
"You look... so.." Luis tried to say, but couldn't think of the right words to say. "Beautiful."
"Thanks!" Hannah replied casually even though her heart beat had gone from standard to what seemed like 341 beats per minute.
There was an awkward silence, and it made the both of them nervous.
"Uh, well.. dinner's all set!" Hannah said, breaking the silence. They both sat down next to each other at the table and began to eat.
"So..." Luis began. "What's up?"
"Oh, just same old.." Hannah replied. "What about you?"
"Nothing.." he sighed. "I'm really glad I got to come here for dinner, though." He turned and faced her. He looked deep into her beautiful eyes and pushed her thick curls behind her ears. He stroked her cheek and smiled at her.
Hannah could see him taking small glances at her chest, but resisiting, which she thought was kinda cute. She could feel the heat and began to fell her heart beat faster and faster, she was at a loss for words, she had butterflies in her stomach, everything was so hectic in her mind, and the thing about it all was.. she liked it.
Slowly, she closed her eyes and leaned forward to him. Their lips met in a long kiss and as they pulled away, Luis leaned on her shoulder and whispered, "I love you."
Hannah looked at him and all of a sudden didn't feel nervous anymore. She knew what to say, because she knew exactly how she felt.
"I love you too," she said. "I'd like to take our relationship a little further."

You have the following choices:

1. Luis says yes

2. Luis says no

3. Luis

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