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Rated: 13+ · Interactive · Romance/Love · #159503

When best of friends have to choose between frienship and love

This choice: Ask about the night before  •  Go Back...
Chapter #5

What Was THAT?

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Hannah opened her mouth to speak, but she ran off in fright, leaving Luis in confusion. Luis was quiet at dinner, and hardly ate a thing. Maria and her husband Poncho were worried.
“¿Qué tal, querido?” asked Maria worriedly.
“Bien, mama. There is nothing wrong.”
“There must be, querido.”
“Estoy cansado.” He pushed his plate away and went up to his room.
He was sitting there, alone, when suddenly he heard a noise outside. He leaned out the window to see Hannah. He smiled.
“Hello, Hannah,” he told her. She smiled.
“Luis, can you come down, please?”
“Si, querida,” he said flirtingly. Hannah blushed
When he got down to her, she smiled.
“Luis, what was that yesterday, on my porch?”
He looked at the ground and was very uncomfortable.
“If you really want to know...” he said, finally shifting his eyes up to meet hers, “I don’t know how I will explain it.”
“Luis, you can tell me,” she said, nearing him and looking at him. Then he leaned down and, lifting her mouth with his chin, and shared an almost magical kiss.

You have the following choices:

1. He pulls away

2. She pulls away

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