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There's a new mall in your town, and it has some items that may 'change' you.

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Chapter #5

The candy shop

    by: meboeck Author IconMail Icon
In the end, your sweet tooth got the best of you and you wandered into the candy shop. As you walked in, you passed a five year old licking a giant lollipop. Looking toward the counter, you saw a very obese red haired young man walking into the back room. You were amazed! He couldn't have been much older than you, but he looked to be over 400 pounds! Unsurprisingly, most of the people in the candy store were kids. You were surprised to see that some of them had pretty big bellies for being so young. You wandered around the store browsing. They had everything from gourmet chocolates to hard candy to gummies to gum. Something kept bugging you as you walked around the store. Finally it hit you. Most of the kids in the store didn't seem to have adults with them. And some of them were as young as four or five. You remembered the kid walking out of the store with the lollipop. He seemed to be completely by himself.

Despite the odd things you were noticing, your sweet tooth was urging you to buy something. You looked back toward the counter to see a slim redhead walking out of the back room. The young man was probably just a couple of years older than you. Something seemed really weird. What were the chances that the candy store would have two red haired employees that were about the same age? You rationalized that maybe they were brothers. You were jolted out of your thoughts when the employee spoke to you.

"Hi, welcome to the candy shop!" he said. "My name is Will, I can assist you with anything you need. Have any of our candies caught your eye? You can try free samples of most of our candies."

Will's smile and friendly manner made everything feel better. You decided you would take him up on the offer of a free sample, but with so many great candies, it was hard to choose what to try.

"Finally you decided on...

You have the following choices:

1. chocolate

2. a lollipop

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