(I'm changing the option a bit to make it easier to write. The POV is constanly switching from you to Melanie to describe both sides of the experience)
You couldn't believe she actually shoved you up her ass! Inside was the worst smell that has ever entered your nostrils. The strength of the smell alone was enough to make you gag. And to make things worse, every time you moved, her anus constricted around your body, squeezing the air out of you.
(Melanie's POV)
The power she held over you was intoxicating. The feeling of you squirming in her shit hole was way better than anything else she has ever felt in her life. She sits in pure ecstasy when her friend, Francis, walks in. (Francis has a larger than normal ass and D cup breasts.)
"Hey Melanie, I'm going out to lunch. Wanna join?" Francis offers.
"Yeah just give me a second to get ready." Melanie responds.
You feel Melanie moving outside and hope for the best. You feel her start to move in a steady pattern. The bouncing and swaying leads you to believe that she is walking. After about a minute, you feel a sudden desention as her colon bends.
Meanwhile, after getting ready, Melanie walks out to Francis's car and takes a seat inside. She brings to ponder about whether or not she should tell Francis about you. After some thought, she decides to...
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