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Rated: 18+ · Interactive · Adult · #1762511

A 19 year old boy gets his hands on various items that can hypnotize people.

This choice: Jumped at Eric saying, "Pretty please my ass."  •  Go Back...
Chapter #5

Please My Ass

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"Pretty please my ass!" Rachel shouted as she leaped forward. With a swift kick she connected with his unprotected crotch. Pain rocked his body as Eric sagged to the ground, allowing Rachel to snatch back her prize. She wasn't prone to violence but Eric had really gotten on her nerves.

"Look what I got!" She taunted, dangling the necklace before his face. Eric's eyes gradually glazed over.

"What is your wish..." he mumbled with blank eyes.

"Huh?" Rachel asked. "What do you mean wish?"

"What did you order last..."

"Order? You mean 'pretty please my ass'?"

"Understood", Eric said as he crawled around her. He tugged at her shorts, exposing her thong and voluptuous buttocks. Rachel screamed as Eric dug his face in, slipping his tongue past the thin strip of fabric and piercing her anus. With a gentle dexterity he vigorously pumped and stroked he sensitive hole.

"Kyaaa!" she moaned. "Eric, wh-what are you doing. St-ahhhhh!"


As weird as it was, Rachel couldn't find it in her to stop the rimjob. Even if it was Eric it was far more pleasant than anything she had felt before. His tongue was like a wonderfully soft piece of velvet tickling her every nerve. Her body was wracked with orgasm as fluid dripped from her snatch.
Sensing her ecstasy, Eric retracted his moist tongue.

"My duty is complete, Rachel," Eric said in a monotonous tone.

"Duty? What duty?" she asked as she wiped the fluid from her curvy thighs and the saliva from her tender back-end.

"You asked me to please your ass, didn't you?" he said matter-of-factly.

Rachel was starting to understand just how odd Eric was acting. It seemed as if he was being mind controlled or something. On a whim, she decided to test out her influence over him.

"Okay, you literal ass-kisser, how about you..."

You have the following choices:

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1. "Suck yourself off"

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2. Go to Whitney's room and proclaim your everlasting love

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