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Rated: 18+ · Interactive · Adult · #1762511

A 19 year old boy gets his hands on various items that can hypnotize people.

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    by: RunninginCircles Author IconMail Icon
Eric's plan was simple. Find Heather, the girl who had made his life a living hell these last four years and get some sweet revenge. They were getting ready to graduate soon so he wanted to get his revenge using this necklace.

His target was Heather Lockhart. She was what many considered to the "Queen Bee" or "Top Bitch" at the school. She had her circle of followers, she dated only the top athletic jock types. Worst of all she came from a rich spoiled family who gave her everything she ever wanted.

Despite all of this, years ago Heather was actually a nice girl. Back in Middle school, she was actually shy, overweight, and really self conscious. Eric was her friend back then. Being kind if awkward himself he looked past all her faults and saw a good person underneath.

However all this changed the year after they finished middle school. Heather's parents being the spoiled rich jerks they are, were both tired of having their only daughter being a shy awkward girl. So they hired a string of personal trainers, diet coaches, even paid for plastic surgery for Heather.

When Heather came back to school after that summer she was a totally different person. She was beautiful, confident, everything about her screamed head cheerleader or spoiled princess. It seemed she had wanted this all along for years but her parents had been reluctant until then to give in. Now Heather had everything she ever wanted and quickly began to gain new friends and new attention.

Meanwhile the only true friend she ever had in Eric had been forgotten. She ignored him, and whenever he tried to talk to her she would just laugh him off. Eventually when Eric desperately tried to muster up the courage to ask her out to a dance, she publicly hamulated him in front of their whole class by laughing in his face and saying she was way out of his league now.

Eric hated this new Heather. Her newfound beauty had made her into a shallow bitch who cared only about her social status. After four years of this which only made things worse, Eric had enough. He was going to remind her where she came from, this necklace was going to place a curse on her to humble her back where she belonged....
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