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Six friends find a deck of poker cards which changes their lives.

This choice: Jeremy comes out on top.  •  Go Back...
Chapter #6

Jeremy's refusal

    by: Mr. Scratch Author IconMail Icon
"Great. I won.", Jeremy said not as enthusiastic as it should have sounded. Jeremy did not really have the wish to swap anything with anyone right now, especially now that everyone was rather agitated.

"What's wrong?", asked Michael. "Just swap something or the game will decide for you.". Jeremy looked at his friend. "Maybe that'd be the best.", answered Jeremy. "That way nobody is angry at me or anything.".

Anna suddenly looked sharp at the current winner of the hand. "Oh yes, nobody would be angry. It's not like I'm angry because this brat got my boyfriend, although she did not say that she wanted to swap with him. Not to mention that she stole my breasts!".

"Hey! I'm not a brat!", replied Melody angrily.

Anna rolled her eyes. "Whatever. I don't think nobody gets angry. That's course of this stupid game!".

Jeremy had to admit, Anna had a point. Even when he did not say anything, people would still be angry at him. On the other hand, there was nothing he wanted to swap and nothing he would regret swapping. At least nothing he could think of.

"I still choose to not swap.", decided Jeremy. "Maybe that way we can get the game more interesting. Nobody knows what happens, nobody can say that it's someone's fault that something has been swapped. Look Anna, it's really not Melody's fault, so stop being a bitch.".

Anna wanted to reply something but stayed silent. She had to admit that Jeremy was right, but she'd never admit it.

"I think the two minutes are nearly over.", Philipp said and looked at the other's. feeling more comfortably in Anna's shoes right now. "Maybe I should go shopping for some cute, red ones.", he thought.

Everyone waited for a swap to take place. The silence was nearly killing everybody. Nobody dared to even breath out. Nothing happened.

Michael looked at his watch after a while. "It's at least 4 minutes after you won. Something has to be swapped, I guess something mental, otherwise someone would have noticed it by now.".

"Anyone feeling different?", asked Jeremy. "'Cause I don't...".

Josie shrugged her shoulders. "We'll find out sooner or later. Let's continue.".

What nobody knows, Jeremy swapped reflections with Melody. Whenever he sees a reflection of himself, he'll see the reflection of his little sister, dressed in clothes equivalent to her what she would be wearing. Nobody would think that the reflection is strange or that it is dressed unappropriate if what Jeremy wears is appropriate (especially when he's naked upwards).

Authors Note: Since male and female clothing is not completely equivalent, there is some freedom. For example when Jeremy puts on his boxers, his reflection would wear panties and bra or just panties. In last case, he would have to wear an undershirt so that the reflection wears a bra. There is also some context sensitivity. If Jeremy wears light, summer clothes, the reflection would wear a summer dress if Melody would wear one at that day.
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