This choice: "We could go into town," • Go Back...Chapter #10"We could go into town," by: This Guy   "You know, a stroll through. If you want that is."
To her surprise, you extend your arm, which she takes. The others, not so far, are gradually making their way to make it possible to spy on you. Even though you heard some twigs snap, or bushes rustling, you didn't care.
Once you got to town, everyone, looks at you two, astounded. They always thought you'd be with somepony else, and that Fluttershy would be more... less.
You even heard chatter from the other ponies:
"Is that really (your name) and Fluttershy?"
"I guess she finally did it."
"And I really thought he never would've pulled it through."
"Of course, he always liked her since they met!"
"Is that really Fluttershy in makeup?"
"They look so cute together!"
Once you went through all the chatter, you stroll through to a park that Fluttershy likes to go to every now and then. Once you sit, you both sigh.
"I can't believe it," you comment.
"We just want to take a stroll and all that happens," Fluttershy adds. "But (your name), did you really like me from the start?"
You look at her. Her somewhat pleading big eyes tell you something. "Fluttershy, to be the most heartfelt honest to you, (you grab her hands), yes. I liked-- no, loved you ever since I saw you. You're just so beautiful, kind, and friendly, that it was impossible for me to admit it."
The pegasus looks at you with a surprised look. You thought you screwed up, but realize its not the case when you see her smile.
"(Your name), I, well... I really liked you, too. I would even say I was lucky enough to not faint afterwards once you'd pass me, especially home. I was really excited when homecoming was announced that I really tried to ask you to go with me. Actually, that was the only reason Twilight Sparkle sent that text. But since none of us did, I still can't forgive myself for tackling you yesterday."
You see her blush a bit and look away, remembering the little crash yesterday. Meanwhile, the spying ponies were looking closely, phones ready, and cameras set.
"Fluttershy..?" you start. She looks at you, with that cute gaze that you couldn't resist but to lean in as she does the same. You both slowly, slowly close your eyes, and kiss right there. Shutters went off, but it was practically silent. You hug Fluttershy and she does the same, still savoring her sweet taste of her full lips.
Once Applejack was satisfied, she looked at the upcoming ponies.
"Oh, great," she whispers. "Girls, look who's here." Everyone turns to see...   indicates the next chapter needs to be written. |
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