This choice: Alice tries to make you smell her feet again • Go Back...Chapter #5Alice tries to make you smell her feet again by: NVR   "..and deeper, letting every other thought disappear aside from the voice.." Alice kept saying and indeed it was all you could notice or care about, that and being relaxed.
"And as I count down from 10 you will feel a deep trance taking over your entire body, where you can only listen and follow the voice.."
Alice stopped rotating her foot and gave you a curious look when she finished the countdown
"Can you hear me Pat?"
"Yes Alice" you mutter in a neutral tone
"You're in a deep trance aren't you?"
"Yes Alice"
"So you will answer with the truth to whatever the voice requests, isn't that right?" Alice giggled, feeling more confidence on herself now that you seemed to be truly hypnotized
"Yes Alice"
"Good, why did you choose to stay here?" Alice decided to start with a harmless question, not knowing how to phrase the real one on why did he break out of her former spell yet.
"You're the same age as me" you muttered without emotion
"Makes sense I guess, thought you would liked Anna more" Alice said more to herself, still thinking about what would be her next move
"You're also my favorite cousin" you replied
"Oh?" Alice was surprised at your comment and gave you a smile that went from tender to devious
"That's right, I'm your favorite cousin"
"Yes Alice"
"So why did you accuse your favorite cousin or doing something to you?"
"Your foot was above my head" was all you said
"So? You were resting on the floor"
"It felt wrong" you frowned a bit and Alice raised one eyebrow
"It's not wrong, I can put my foot whenever I want, it's my room"
You didn't answer so Alice tried something different
"What do you like the most about your favorite cousin?"
"Your intelligence" Alice blushed a bit, having to admit to herself the honest flattery was warming her heart
"And about my body?"
"Your breasts" No surprises there thought Alice with an eyeroll
"Pat, what you like the most about your favorite cousin's body is my feet" Alice stated
Once again you remained quiet
"You like my feet, Pat.. I know you were watching" Alice tried
"..Yes Alice" it worked!
"You love my feet" Alice was thrilled by your reaction, she felt like she was making big progress with her hobby today, all thanks to you
"...Yes Alice"
"You love everything about them"
"Yes Alice" you muttered now without pause
"Say it"
"I love everything about your feet Alice"
"So you have no problem if I put my foot in your head, Pat"
No answer, Alice remained quiet for a minute wondering why it didn't work
"It felt wrong to see my foot above you, right?" Alice started again
"Yes Alice"
"It's because you love my feet so much you feel unworthy of touching them" Alice said with some doubt in her voice, this sounded a bit crazy but after being able to make you say you loved her feet, she felt adventurous
"..."
"You don't touch my feet without my permission"
"Yes Alice" finally a new avenue to explore
"You wouldn't dare to do so, because you love them and it would feel wrong to displease your favorite cousin"
"...Yes Alice"
"You feel if you touch my feet without my permission I would be displeased"
"Yes Alice"
"You feel unworthy of touching my feet unless I allow it"
"...Yes Alice"
"That's why you accused me of doing something to you, it was an excuse"
"Yes Alice"
Alice let out a happy laugh, she was on cloud nine now.. What else would you allow her to override? This was so fun!
"Well, it still displeased me" Alice said "It feels wrong to displease your favorite cousin right?"
"Yes Alice"
"It feels right to please me"
"..Yes Alice"
"When you feel wrong you want to make things right, correct?"
"Yes Alice"
"You need to please me to make things right"
"Yes Alice"
"And you know what pleases me?"
".. No Alice" it made sense, you haven't seen her in a while and things change
"It pleases me when you do what I say, Pat"
"..."
"You like to please your favorite cousin, right?"
"..."
"It feels right when you please your favorite cousin Pat"
"Yes Alice"
"It feels right to do what I say"
"..."
Stuck again, maybe too much instructions? Alice decided to go for one last try
"You like my intelligence right?"
"Yes Alice"
"I'm more intelligent than you"
"Yes Alice"
"I'm a lot smarter, so I know better"
"..Yes Alice"
"You listen to me because I'm intelligent, and know better"
"Yes Alice"
"It feels right to do what I say, because it pleases me and because I know better"
".. Yes Alice" Score!
"You like to do what I say, because it pleases me and because I know better"
"Yes Alice"
"If I tell you to do something, it feels right to do it"
"Yes Alice"
"If I boss you around it feels right and you like it"
"..."
"If I boss you around you like it because it pleases me and because I know better"
"Yes Alice"
"You like it when I boss you around"
"Yes Alice"
"You love it when I boss you around"
"Yes Alice"
"Say it"
"I love it when you boss me around Alice"
Alice couldn't contain herself and had to do a victory dance, she couldn't wait to see how much this worked once you were out of trance. But finally she wanted to settle the score before releasing you, so she took off her reliable hypnotic stockings and let free her slightly sweaty feet with purple toenails just like the walls on her room. If she became this good she wouldn't need them anymore, and that thought was just intoxicating
Now without resistance, she put her foot above your face and smiled at your lack of reaction, you were hers and she could tell it.
"Sniff Pat, you have earned it" Alice giggled with a kind of excitement she probably never felt before
Alice loved watching you obey and frown slightly, it was clear to her what actually happened now, but that didn't matter anymore because the new you had other ideas.
"It's the smell of my foot Pat, the smell of the favorite part of your favorite cousin which you love"
Your face visibly relaxed
"It's an irresistible smell for you, you love it that much"
This time Alice didn't bother waiting for an answer, she could see your reaction and it did enough for her, she saw your face slightly lean towards her foot, as if wanting more of it
"But you feel unworthy of smelling it, and guilty if you do it without my permission"
"When you encounter the smell it makes you want to please me even more, just so you're able to smell it again"
"Because you need my permission, because without my permission it feels wrong and guilty"
"Now stop"
Alice retired her foot and finally rounded things up, putting back her stockings just in case but knowing the next steps she would have to refrain from hypnotizing you for a while. The wait was worth it though.
"You will wake up when I snap my fingers, feeling refreshed and not remembering any of what the voice said but still feeling and believing it. When I say the words "It's not wrong for Alice" you will go back to this state where you can only listen and obey what the voice says, the voice of your favorite cousin that knows better"
"Yes Alice"
"Alright then"
*snap*
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