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Rated: 13+ · Interactive · Fantasy · #1934545

Can a human prisoner survive in a jail built for giant monsters? Keep it a fantasy please

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Chapter #4

Notion of the Potion

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Priscilla grabs together a few herbs and spices and mixes them together. "Okay Wade," she says. "I'm going to make an invisibility potion. It will make you invisible just long enough to escape from this rathole." "Well hurry up and make the potion already!" you yell impatiently. The potion bubbles as Priscilla picks out some more herbs. "Patience, Wade," she says. "This is delicate work. Rushing the potion could have a different effect than dis..." Priscilla accidentally spills some sap into the potion and causes it to let out a flash of smoke.

You both cough before the smoke clears and then you hear a sound of claws scraping the floor. "What the hell was that kooky noise!?" yells a familiar voice. You let out a scream. "Cree!" you yell. Priscilla gives a nervous look and starts adding the ingredients more rapidly, causing the potion to bubble. "Oh crap," she mutters. "Oh crap, oh crap! If Cree sees this stash, our goose is cooked." "Hurry! Hurry! Hurry!" You yell.

Priscilla holds the potion as it keeps leaking out bubbles and turns pitch black. "Oh crap." She says. "Wade, I'm not sure if this invisible potion will even work." "Just hurry up and pour it on me!" you yell. "I do not want to see what a were hyena looks like from the inside." You hear evil laughter and then you look to see a hyena shaped shadow approaching.

Acting fast, Priscilla spills the potion all over you and makes you gag and spit out some of it. Suddenly you feel your body twitching. This was it, hopefully you'd be invisible, just in time for Cree to show up!
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