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How will the mouse boy survive in a school full of giantesses?

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Chapter #6

Dawn tries to pick up a pile of her pancakes......

    by: The Swift Gale Author IconMail Icon
As Chez continues to watch Dawn's efforts in retrieving any food on her fork, he watches as the fork she was holding above him rhythmically swishes side to side. Apparently she was trying her best to try and find the specific location past the smears adorning her glasses. Nervous by her methods, Chez begins to slowly back away from the center of the tray before an unexpected thud soon manages to impact his side. By the shear force of the odd blow, Chez feels gravity shift about him as he lands upon an odd soft surface that luckily manages to break his fall. With a groan and small rub in the impacted area, Chez's eyes quickly gaze down upon the odd object only to discover a light brown color residing below. With shocked eyes, he quickly scrambles up into a sitting position only to discover he was right upon the mid right area of Dawn's massive pancakes. "Ah, here we are." Dawn says to herself as her massive fork manages to finally land upon the breakfast delicacy.

If matters couldn't be worse, Chez watches as the fork was quickly turned to his sides as it began to pierce down trough the pancake like a makeshift knife. "W-woah!" he stammers as the constant movements cause him to lose balance and land back upon the pancake right on his rear. Once he manages to return into a seating position, Dawn's massive fork was already piercing down at the pancake mere feet away from him, heading straight towards the edge of the plate. Once the Pancake was finally cut, the fork was raised as Chez quickly gazes down upon the odd cut section Dawn successfully managed to create. In horror, he notices that the entire cut area was the very location he was sitting upon. Terrified, Chez quickly tries his best to get a good footing and sprint his way off of the huge pancake. Though, just before reaching the edge, the whole area around him begins to shake as both him and the breakfast treat were quickly raised upwards.

Seeing as how trying to grab the pancakes for support was out of the question, Chez quickly latches on to the nearest solid surface, which just happened to be Dawn's huge fork. Reluctantly, Chez turns to gaze upon the massive doe girl only to gaze in shear disbelief at her massive open maw. The pink innards of the organic cavern glistened with saliva coating the huge muscled surface of her tongue. Long strands stretched out as the dark pink abyss that was Dawn's throat pulsated gently before releasing a blast of hot breath. "D-Dawn!" Chez shouts in desperation as he was quickly inched closer to the awaiting abyss of Dawns huge mouth.
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1. Dawn manages to hear him.

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2. Dawn shoves the pancake (and chez) into her mouth unknowingly.

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