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Rated: 18+ · Interactive · Sci-fi · #1965244

A socially inept young man or woman gets impressive powers.

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Chapter #9

A club

    by: Millie Author IconMail Icon
Talia Sunset emerged from the hotel's grand entrance, her skin aglow under the soft streetlights. She could feel the energy of the city pulsing around her, the distant throb of music calling to the wildness within her. The air had the scent of the ocean and the promise of a night filled with excitement. She knew she looked breathtaking, her newfound power radiating from her like an invisible aura that drew every eye in her direction.

Strutting down the sidewalk with the confidence of a lioness on the prowl, Talia reveled in the whispers that trailed her like a seductive scent. The men ogled, their jaws slackening as she passed, their eyes devouring her muscular sexy body. The women's gazes were more guarded, a mix of envy and spite that she found utterly amusing. She knew she was the most powerful being in the room, and she didn't care who knew it.

As she approached the bustling street corner, she playfully twirled the chain of her bellybutton ring with her long, black-manicured fingernails, the gold glinting in the streetlights. A group of boys, not much younger than her, watched her with wide eyes. One, in particular, caught her eye she winked at him, a knowing smile playing on her lips. His cheeks turned a delicious shade of red, and she could see his girlfriend's eyes narrow into slits. The power was intoxicating.

The line outside the club stretched around the block, a sea of desperate faces hoping for a glimpse of the promised land within. Talia had no time for such trivialities. She breezed past the velvet rope, her eyes scanning the crowd with a look that could melt ice. The bouncer, a hulking brute with a neck as thick as a tree trunk, stepped in her path. His face was a mask of confusion, his eyes flickering down to her navel ring and back to her face. "You can't just cut," he began, his voice gruff and unwelcoming.

"Like of course I can," Talia purred, her voice as sweet as honey and just as deadly. She gave the bouncer a look that could make the sunset itself jealous, and his expression softened. "Like you don't know who I am?" she asked, a hint of a challenge in her tone. The bouncer's eyes widened as he took in her beauty and the unmistakable air of entitlement that surrounded her.

"Look Miss just go to the end of the line," the bouncer said, his voice still gruff but with a hint of uncertainty. Talia knew she could easily use her newfound strength to barge past him, but she had to be cautious. The mirror witch's words echoed in her mind: "You must learn to blend in."

Taking a deep breath, she decided to use her magic subtly instead. She focused her energy, whispering a spell under her breath, her eyes never leaving his. The air around her fizzed with unseen power, and the bouncer's expression morphed from skepticism to admiration. "My apologies," he said, stepping aside. "You're absolutely right. You should go in."

The crowd behind her murmured in protest, their eyes burning with resentment. She tossed her hair over her shoulder and sailed past them, her hips swaying to the beat of the bass that thumped through the walls of the club. She could feel their envy and anger, like a warm embrace, and she reveled in it. It was intoxicating, like the sweet scent of success that followed her wherever she went.

When she reached the bar, Talia perched herself on a stool, her legs crossing elegantly. The bartender, a young man with a sculpted jaw and a piercing gaze, couldn't help but look up from his bottles of glowing liquor. "What can I get you?" he asked, his voice a smooth blend of charm and indifference.

"Like bring me Pina Colada, like STAT!" Talia shouted over the thumping bass, her voice a siren's call that the bartender couldn't ignore. He nodded, mixing her drink with the precision of a Michelin-starred chef crafting a dish. She watched him, her eyes narrowed, willing him to hurry with a flick of her wrist. The power was intoxicating, a heady feeling that made her skin tingle.

The drink arrived, a frothy concoction of rum and pineapple, topped with a cherry that seemed to wink at her. She took a sip, the cool liquid sliding down her throat like a promise of more power to come. To her surprise, the alcohol didn't hit her the way it used to. Her new body felt almost impervious to its effects. "Weird," she murmured to herself, taking another, longer sip.

The music pulsed around her, the bass vibrating in her chest, setting her heart to the rhythm of the club's pulse. She watched as the sea of dancers moved in time with the beat, their bodies a blur of sweat and sequins. The strobe lights painted the room in a kaleidoscope of colors, and she felt like the queen of the disco ball, her every move reflected a hundred times over.

Talia set her drink down and stepped into the throng of bodies, her movements a deliberate, seductive dance. Each step was calculated to show off her strength and grace. She flowed through the crowd, her hips swaying, her hands tracing the air in graceful arcs. The energy around her grew denser, the air charged with anticipation. Her every move was a silent challenge, daring anyone to look away.

The dancers parted before her, creating a space that was unmistakably hers. She reveled in the attention, her smile as bright as a thousand spotlights. Her body was a canvas of power, and she painted it with the strokes of her dance, each motion telling a story of seduction and dominance. The club's lights played across her skin, turning her into a living aurora, a vision of beauty and might that no mortal could ignore.

Her eyes fell upon a cute couple, lost in their own little world, oblivious to the storm brewing around them. The man was tall, with a chiseled jaw and eyes that held the promise of adventure. His girlfriend was pretty in a girl-next-door kind of way, with a smile that was as sweet as it was naive. Talia felt a wicked thrill, her eyes narrowing as she homed in on her prey. Breaking couples was one of her favorite pastimes, a game that never grew old. It was all so simple with her newfound abilities.

She start walking sexually towards the couple, her hips swaying with each step, her breasts jutting out proudly, the fabric of her dress stretching tight across her toned stomach and tightly around her eight-pack abs. The guy couldn't help but stare, his eyes drawn to the mesmerizing display of power and beauty. She knew he was hers for the taking.

Talia leaned over the crowded bar, giving the guy a clear view of her ample cleavage. "Totally, can you believe how crowded it is tonight?" she asked, her voice a seductive purr. He looked up, his eyes meeting hers, and she saw the hunger in them, the desire that only a witch of her caliber could inspire. She took a sip of her drink, her full, black lips wrapping around the straw in a way that made his mouth go dry.

Her breasts, now larger and firmer thanks to her newfound powers, strained against the fabric of her dress. She knew he was watching, his eyes greedily devouring the sight. With a coy smile, she reached up to adjust her hair, her biceps flexing with the movement. The veins on her arms stood out, a testament to the strength she now possessed. The guy's eyes widened, his gaze transfixed by the powerful muscles rippling beneath her skin.

Talia leaned closer, her breasts threatening to spill out of the dress. "Could you, like, totally help me?" she asked, her voice dripping with sweetness. She watched as he swallowed hard, his eyes flicking down to her chest before darting back up to meet hers. "What's a girl to do when she can't even get a drink?" She pouted, her full lips begging for a taste of something more than the sugary concoction in her glass.

The girlfriend, a brunette with a tight, red dress and a scowl that could cut glass, stepped forward. "What the hell do you think you're doing?" she spat, her voice tight with anger. "Leave him alone. He's with me."

Talia's smile grew wider, her eyes sparkling with mischief. "Oh, really?" she said, her voice a mocking purr. "He seems to be enjoying the company of a real woman." She took a sip of her drink, the liquid sliding down her throat like silk, leaving a trail of cold fire in its wake. The man's eyes remained glued to her, his pupils dilated with desire.

The brunette's hands clenched into fists at her sides, her knuckles turning white. "You're just a slutty gold-digger," she spat, her voice thick with anger. "What do you even know about love?"

Talia's smile never wavered. "Love? Oh honey, I'm not here for love," she said, her voice a syrupy drawl. "I'm here for quick fuck. And it looks like your man has realized he's been playing in the kiddie pool when he could be swimming with the big fish." She took a step closer, her hand resting lightly on the man's chest.

The brunette's eyes narrowed, her nostrils flaring. "You think you're better than me? You're just a plastic bitch with daddy's money and a fake tan," she snarled.

Talia's laugh was a melodious tinkle, the sound of breaking glass. "Plastic? Oh no, darling, that's the one thing I'm not," she replied, her voice like honeyed poison. "Everything about me is real, from my tits to my toes." She wiggled the latter, the slit in her dress revealing an enticing slice of thigh. "And as for my tan, I'd say it's more of a divine gift than something you could ever get from a bottle or a tanning booth."

The brunette's face flushed a deep shade of crimson, and before Talia could finish her sentence, she'd raised her hand and slapped her across the face. It was a sound that echoed through the club, a sharp crack that silenced the surrounding chatter. But as the woman's hand made contact, it was as if she'd slapped a statue. Talia's skin was unyielding, her beauty unmarred.

"My hand hurts," the brunette complained, her hand stinging from the impact. Talia's skin had felt like steel under her palm, not the soft, supple flesh she'd expected. She stared at her hand in shock, as if it had betrayed her.
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