Chapter #6Continue (Commission Chapter) by: Gavalar   Asking him what he thinks, David drops to his knees in shock. At first he was sure that you were the real Suzuki that was here to surprise him, but after studying your movements for a few minutes he soon accepts that it really is you standing in front of him as a copy of his girlfriend. He walks around you, complementing you on how well you have taken on Suzuki's image. He seems especially surprised by how accurate the jewellery that you are wearing is to the ones that Suzuki owns. David also recognises your dress from a wedding that you had all recently attended together.
David asks you how it feels to be an exact copy of Suzuki. You try to explain to him how different it feels being a woman compared to a man. You talk about the weight of having breasts and the sensation of having a vagina in place of a penis. You then mention how strange it feels to wear a dress and heels and how odd it feels to wear earrings and the sensation of having pieces of jewellery piercing and hanging from your ears.
To your surprise, David then asks if he can touch you, visibly blushing as he does so. Seeing as you have currently taken on the form of his girlfriend, you decide to let him. It's only fair. David then approaches you and starts fondling your breasts with both hands. It was an odd sensation for you, but a welcome one. You just continue to stand there as David runs his hands over your body. He then lowers the straps of your dress, pulling it down to expose your breasts for the first time. As he continues fondling them, David comments on how they look exactly like Suzuki's.
David then lowers one hand to your crotch and begins rubbing through the fabric off your dress. Unfamiliar with these sensations, you begin to moan. The experience is short lived though as David stops and takes a step back from you. You ask him what is wrong. He then confesses that he has weirded himself out. Even though you look exactly like his girlfriend, the thought of his best friend inhabiting that body as he played with it put him off.
You can understand how he feels. From your perspective it did feel weird that your male best friend was feeling you up and pleasuring you. David continues explaining how ashamed he feels after touching you. He tells you that even though you look like his girlfriend, you still move and talk differently from her and that it became obvious that you weren't the real Suzuki. He then asks you to change back as he finds it uncomfortable to look at you anymore.
As you think more deeply about what David said and how he feels, you notice a tingling sensation stirring inside your head. Feeling dazed, you fall backwards onto the couch, clutching the side of your head as you do so. David grows concerned and asks if you are okay. You don't answer.
After a few minutes, the tingling fades away. You look down at yourself, but don't notice any changes to your body. In fact you don't notice any changes at all. You stand up again, sorting the bottom of your dress as you straighten up. Realising that your breasts are still exposed, you turn away from David and fix your straps again before turning back to face him.
David asks again if you are okay, and comments on how you are acting strange. You tell him that you don't know what he is talking about as you fix a strand of hair that had fallen out of place. David then comments on how you are now speaking in a more feminine tone now. You don't understand what he means, as you've always talked this way.
Strangely, as David takes a step closer to you, placing his hand on your shoulder, you feel you heart begin to race. You can't understand why you are so flustered by David's presence. As you look up at him, you find yourself unable to draw your attention away from his eyes. As you continue to stare deeply, David has his own revelation on what is happening.
David notes how you became light-headed and collapsed onto the couch, the started acting more feminine immediately after recovering. As the two of you stare into each other's each, David realises that not only does your body now match Suzuki's, but your personality does too. Whatever happened before has somehow changed your personality to match that of your current body, but oddly enough, you don't notice it yourself.
Deciding to act on the new urges that you are feeling, you lean in and kiss David. He doesn't resist and instead returns the kiss. Things only escalate from there as you tear away each other's clothes before moving over to the couch. As David mounts you, a variety of new sensations rush through your body, yet they feel oddly familiar somehow.
Half an hour passes before the two of you finally reach your climax, collapsing onto the floor next to each other exhausted. David accidentally calls you Suzuki for a moment before correcting himself. He admits that he forgot you aren't really her. He tells you how he thinks that your personality has changed somehow and how he thinks that you haven't noticed. He was right, you hadn't noticed any changes until he pointed them out. As he does so, the tingling returns and before long your original personality came back.
You realise how strange everything you just did was. Hell, you just had sex with your best friend while posing as his girlfriend. Yet in the moment, it didn't feel strange at all. It seems that your list of powers just keeps on growing...   indicates the next chapter needs to be written. |
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