This choice: Follow to see what these two plan to do to Naruto. (Reserved) • Go Back... It had been a few days since Naruto was captured and in that time not a single person outside of Naruto and his two kidnappers knew or cared that the boy had gone missing. For Naruto these days had been utter hell. They would beat him, stab him, yell at him, give him these odd pokes that caused him to hurt terribly and anything else they seemed to think up that could hurt him. The one thing that seem constant outside of pain was that they were always talking to him like he was some kind of animal, while praising some person he didn't know. He of course had then shouted out that once he was Hokage like the old man he'd find the person they were doing this for and beat them up! In hindsight, not the best thing to say...
Did he mention the weird symbols they put on him? He currently had these weird things that looked like the lines and shapes he had seen in books and scrolls. Not that he understood what any of them said. They seemed to go around his neck and one part somehow floated in the air leading from the part on his neck to a heavy cement block covered in those same marks at the center of the room he was in. If tried escaping then the marks around his neck became so tight he couldn't breath and the part that floated seemed to try and pull him back towards the cement block. It always stopped him just before he could reach the door too.
Oh, that was another thing. Apparently, these people had brought him to some rundown old storage shed in the middle of some abandoned training field. Naruto idly wondered why the ninja wouldn't go to a training field. A training field was where you trained and a ninja was always suppose to train weren't they? He shook his head to clear it of those thoughts. He didn't need them distracting him from getting away and finding the old man.
Those thoughts came to a screeching halt when the door was kicked in and his tormentors steeped through with big grins on their faces. That was never a good thing for him.
He had no idea how right he was.
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-Over a month later; Date: December 27, four years after Kyūbi's attack-
The two Hyuga's looked at their handy work with pride. It had taken nearly a month and a half but, they had managed to break the blond completely tearing away his sense of dignity and self worth. The rest of the time was used to properly train the brat to obey any order from his soon to be new master. It had taken some creative thinking to make sure he'd be loyal to to their Yotsugi-dono (heir/successor) only but, they had found a way to make it work. Paying off that Yanamaka clan ninja to place a set of subtle mental suggestions inside the blonds head had likely helped as well.
"What say you my friend?" Asked the female without taking her eyes off the still collared boy. "We've broken it and trained it so that it will do such humiliating and degrading things with nearly no resistance. Any sense of dignity it still has is restrained by the teachings and mental suggestions we've given it. Why if our Yotsugi-dono told it to open its mouth and be her personal toilet it would do so without hesitation, even if it didn't wish to. I believe our 'gift' is ready. Do you?"
The male of the two thought on this question while watching the brat dress itself in an outfit befitting its new status. Nothing overly fancy as slaves and pets like this would only dirty such fine clothes. Still, they couldn't allow this 'thing' to grace their heiresses presence and company in filthy rags either. A simple black short sleeve shirt and matching black pants had been chosen, mostly because they were durable and would last for sometime. No footwear was given to it as it was below such rights. Lastly, the seals that made up its collar had been changed and laced into a custom ordered choker that would grow to fit perfectly around the brats neck no matter how large it grew.
The boy then turned towards them, letting him view the rest of it. The face was slightly sunken, made all the more obvious from the three whiskers on each cheek, a clear sign of malnourishment and hunger. It's hair, once vibrant and untamable, seemingly having a life of its own now drooped pitifully and it's shine all but, gone. The most eye drawing part however, was its blue eyes. Once filled with a lively spark and vibrance that only barely covered up the pain, suffering, loneliness and anger hidden within. Now those same eyes seemed dull, almost dead if not for the pain and loneliness that still festered deep within its soul.
"Yes," he said feeling most pleased with the results. "I believe Hinata-sama will come to love her 'gift.' We will need to ensure she 'properly' cares for it of course. We don't want it starting to think that it's life actually matters, now do we." Finished the male, the last part clearly being a statement not a question. "Well then, we better get going then. Don't want to be late for Yotsugi-dono's birthday party after all."
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