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a teen with an unusual condition tries to make it through the day, will he survive?

This choice: Mary notices your squirms!  •  Go Back...
Chapter #9

Gum In Mary's Bag

    by: Unknown
Mary held you over the trash can, and extremely perilous position to be in. You squirmed and squirmed like you never had before, as your life potentially depended on it. To your complete surprise, Mary’s gaze actually shifted down to you in her hand. She had noticed your squirms. You continued to wiggle and shake, and her eyes slowly went wide.

“What in the world!” She exclaimed. “Jackie!” Stacy and Emma looked at her in confusion, and walked over to her. The peered at your shaking and quivering form in her hand.

“Huh. It is Jackie.” Stacy noted.

“What?” Emma cried. “How did her get stuck to my thigh like that?” Emma blushed uncontrollably.

“It was probably Gary, that jerk.” Mary sighed. You mentally blushed as you realized that it had actually been all your fault. Mary dropped you into the bag she was carrying with her, and you rolled to a stop beside her street clothes and her purse.

“Why are you putting him in there Mary?” Stacy wondered.

“To keep him safe.” Mary nodded. She looked down at you in the bag, and your crumpled from stared up at her. “Stay safe in there Jackie! I’ll let you out when I get a chance.” She closed up her bag, casting you into darkness.

The three teens continued to carry on with their day, and you were brought along with them wherever they went. Mary made sure not to swing her bag too much, but you could still feel the back and forth motion as her arms moved when she walked.

Finally, the girl’s decided to take a break and meet up with everyone else for lunch. Trish, Barbara, and Tina were already at the designated restaurant, and the girls were the last to arrive. Gary, Andrew, and Stevie were still goofing off somewhere.

Mary dropped her bag gently onto the ground, and then sat down with everyone else. They ordered their food, and then enjoyed a pleasant meal. Mary was thankful that your mom didn’t question where you were, as she really didn’t want to explain the awkward situation that had occurred.

The meal ended, and Stacy and Emma were ready to continue riding waterslides. Mary told them that she needed to use the bathroom quickly, and so she ran off to go do so. Just then, Tina spoke up.

“Hey girls.” She said. Stacy and Emma turned to her. “Does Mary have any gum in her bag? I like the chew a piece after every meal.”

The girls thought about it for a second, and then decided to check Mary’s bag. Unfortunately, they had forgotten all about you during the previous two hours. Stacy spotted your crushed up ball shaped form at the bottom of Mary’s bag, and she pulled you out.

“Here you go!” She dropped you into Tina’s awaiting hand. You were panicked beyond belief about your situation. Sometimes you forgot how forgetful Stacy and Emma could be. If only your girlfriend was here to save you. She had chosen the worst possible time to go to the bathroom.

Tina brought you up to her face, and inhaled, absorbing a large waft of smell from your body. She licked her lips, and sighed happily. She opened her mouth, and raised her hand to drop you into her awaiting mouth.

You could see her mouth in all it’s terrifying entirety, and you tried to scream and yell to get her attention. Sadly, your crushed up body couldn’t make a sound. All you could do was stare at the wet and dark cavern that was her mouth.

You have the following choices:

1. Mary returns in time to save you from being eaten.

2. Mary doesn't return, and Tina chews you up.

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