Chapter #4Demonic Diva by: Unknown The door opens up and you see the first customer who you notice nonchalantly. "That time of the week again." You say to yourself. The customer was a regular, Lee Gin. The reason she was a regular was because Lee was the one species of monster that wouldn't be out of place at a beauty parlor.
Lee was a 680ft tall succubus, a female demon that seduced human men. She was very fat with a huge bulging belly and thunderous thighs (though not as big as Maggie's but very close) and breasts that were like volleyballs. She had gray skin and long light blue hair that reached to her butt. Being a demon, she had horns on her forehead, a devil's tail and leather wings. She also had snake-like eyes and hooves for feet. She was wearing her usual attire, a dental-floss thin leather bra and blue pants with bats all over them, much like Morrigan Aensland.
As Lee entered the parlor, she waved her hair and gave a smug smile as she shook her breasts. Even for a succubus, Lee was the biggest sex fiend you had ever met. She didn't care about the species or even the gender. In fact, she worked at a nightclub as a singer/exotic dancer. The scariest part is that Lee wasn't born a succubus. She used to be a human, until the day she did it with an incubus. You still haven't figured out how it happened, but she got knocked up. Surely giving birth to a building sized offspring would more than likely kill a human sized mother, but the moment Lee became pregnant, her body was transmogrified into a titanic succubus, twice as big as the incubus that impregnated her.
You heard that Lee was obsessed with power and sex even as a human and now that she's a succubus, her lust is one hundred times more out of control. She was extremely dominant as well. You heard that her incubus mate filed a restraining order against her for harassment. When a freaking incubus is concerned about your libido, you know you have a problem. Not that Lee cared.
"Miss me?" asked the succubus as she blew a kiss at both Atlanta and Prima. Prima shivers as Atlanta almost gags. "My," says Prima. "You're in a good mood today, Olympia. "That's right," you thought. "Lee is short for Olympia." Lee bent over and shook her enormous rear, forcing you to look away as she rubbed her tail in Prima's face. "I'm in a very good mood, Prima. I did it last night with a purple gargoyle who was easy on the muscles. Sure he was a little old and he said he did it with at least two other gargs, I think he said one of them was a prison guard or something, but whatever, he was tired of his own species, so he punched a ticket on the Lee Gin express. Wish I could remember his name though."
You roll your eyes. You're surprised Lee only has ONE daughter after all these years. Lee then walks up and looks down on you. You're at eye level with her navel that was as big as a cave. "Hi, Neil," she says. "How's Maggie doing." "Uh, she's doing okay, Lee. Sapphire's told me about your daughter, Donna was it? She's in all her classes." Lee just let out a sigh. "Don't get me started on her." "Why not? Sapphire said that Lee's grades were on level with hers. That's quite a compliment I might add." Lee scoffed and stuck out a serpentine tongue covered in black piercings. "What does that matter to a succubus? My daughter is as homely as an empty cupboard. Flat chested, needs glasses, skinny as a rail. Who ever heard of an unattractive succubus?"
"Ouch." You think to yourself. Sapphire did describe Donna as being... to put it bluntly, a nerd. From the sound of it, she wasn't grotesque ugly but plain looking which counted as ugly by succubus standards. "Looks aren't everything, you know." You say. Lee just breaks into hysterical laughter before lowering her head to your level and pushing you across the table with her nose. "Neil," she says. "For succubi, looks are everything. Speaking of which, I thing my hair, gut, spine and wings are in order and I'm in luck. You're on nail duty."
You let out a laugh. "So, what do you want me to work on first, Ms. Gin." Lee gave a smile. "You can start with my..."   indicates the next chapter needs to be written. |
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