I've pulled this story from CHYOA, but it wasn't even a Naruto story originally. I've poked through and changed things so they reflect Naruto better and improved the story structure and grammar a bit. The original story was written by user naan19. https://chyoa.com/index.php/chapter/Mess...
Temari was visiting Konoha for a diplomatic mission with her brothers. She was meant to be a guard for the Kazekage, her brother Gaara, but the problem was she just couldn't focus at all. No matter what she did, her mind kept drifting to Shikamaru. The boy she had met at the chunin exams annoyed her, so why was she so infatuated with him?! While Temari was doing the mental gymnastics trying to figure out her problem, she must have had an empty look on her face.
"...mari!{/ size} Temari!" She heard him say loudly. Temari looked up with wide eyes. Both Gaara and KankurÅ were staring at her.
"Yeah?"
"Finally, I've only had to shout to get your attention. You okay? You look distracted."
Temari blushed. No why could they know why she couldn't focus. She'd never hear the end of it. Temari cringed at the thought. "Oh... um... yeah, I just feel a little off is all, no need to worry." She lied through her smile.
Gaara leaned in to her. "You do look a little red, why don't you head over to our inn and rest, okay? I don't think I'll need two guards here."
Temari nodded. "T-thanks Gaara, be safe."
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Instead of going to their Inn, Temari decided that just going to confront Shikamaru would be there best way to clear her head, so she started making her way to his house, where Shikamaru would surely be.
Another thirty minutes and Temari was standing right outside the house. For several minutes she just stood outside, psyching herself up.
"It's no big deal, you can do this, just go in there, and tell him what you really think." Temari must have been standing out there like an idiot for at least ten minutes before finally marching up to the door and entering. Much to her surprise, Shikamaru wasn't there, nor his parents. Instead, the only person inside was Ino, Shikamaru's teammate.
'Shame.' Temari thought to herself. Just as she was about to cut her losses and leave, Temari was surprised to suddenly find herself invited in by the enigmatic girl.
"Oh! Temari was it? Come in please! If it's Shikamaru your looking for he should be returning momentarily. You're more than welcome to have a seat in the meantime."
Something about Ino's tone made it clear that, despite her words, Ino had no intentions of having a friendly conversation. So Temari dropped any niceties.
"How the hell do you know about that?!" Temari demanded.
"Oh don't be so silly" Ino said with a wide smirk cracked across her face "I'm a Yamanaka, I can easily tell what anyone's thinking."
Temari felt a shiver down her spine, god this woman was creepy, how she could just read thoughts like that. It didn't matter that much, if Shikamaru was going to be there soon, then this would all be worth it. Cautiously, Temari seated herself nearby the still smirking Ino. Temari decided to take this time to learn exactly what Ino knew about her.
"So how long have you known about my feelings for Shikamaru?" she asked
"I didn't, I just suspected, but you asking me was a delightful confirmation."
'Damn!' Temari thought as she blushed uncontrollably again
Ino continued with a wide smile, likely knowing what Temari just thought. "But if I'm being perfectly honest with you, you may as well just give it up right now. You see, I'm also trying to earn Shikamaru's heart, and frankly, he could never fall for someone like you." Temari could practically hear the sound of her heart shattering like glass. How dare this bitch talk to her like that.
Flustered, Temari unwittingly muttered, "Like you're so much better floozy"
"I'm sorry, what was that?" Ino asked, her polite smile still on but with a hint of hostility now. Temari blushed harder.
"What? Oh it was nothing."
"Really? because I could have sworn that you just called me a floozy under your breath just then" Ino said, her tone and expression suddenly turning much more serious.
"You know, I was only trying to be polite, but now you've really soured my mood. Why don't you go on ahead and scram back home." she said as she activated a jutsu. Before she could do anything about it, jutsu fog engulfed Temari, and before she even realized it, she was back inside the hidden sand, not a scratch on her. Temari released a sigh of frustration before getting back up on her feet and starting back for home.
As Temari kept making her way through the streets she couldn't help but feel like something was off. Every time she walked past someone they would either blush, cover their eyes, or even had the audacity to whistle at her. Temari knew men could be such pigs sometime! but even the women she passed were acting strangely, giving her judgmental looks or shaking their heads at her. Temari simply let out an audible "Hmph!" a shot her glance away from them and kept trudging forward. Eventually Temari found herself walking past a local pub, and one of the ruffians outside then made an obscene gesture.
"That's it baby! How much eh?" Finally pushed to her limit, Temari turned to direct her attention at this scumbag
"Now listen you!" she yelled to him, but before she could continue, she was halted by a sudden realization. Temari stood frozen in the middle of the street, slowly glancing down at her body before squealing in embarrassment. She was stark naked! that lunatic Ino teleported her to the middle of the Sand village without a stitch of clothing on her body! Her entire body was on display for everyone with a good set of eyes to see. Her smooth pale skin, her moderate and firm breasts and their pert nipples, her jiggly generous ass. Worst of all, it was now clear as day to everyone that the carpets indeed matched the drapes, with Temari's vulva and its blonde hair, trimmed and maintained as a triangle, was out for any gawker to see. Temari let out a terrified shriek before dashing off to one of the nearby alleys, multiple people wolf whistling and cheering at her as as she dashed by them
"Oh my god! how long was I walking for!? How many people saw it all?!" She asked herself in anguish "And how the hell am I supposed to get home like this?!"  | Members who added to this interactive story also contributed to these: |
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