Chapter #5Alodia Gosiengfiao by: Xhion   As her personal therapist you have grown fond to Alodia, and how not to be? she was a sexy young woman, kind and beautiful, she had almost all a woman for her age would want, almost.
Although she was deeply in love whit her boyfriend, the boy was nothing but a nuisance to her career, that's why she came after you, so maybe you should be thankful some way. Over the past year you have become close to the girl, some kind of confessor or a counselor, helping her to obtain balance between her career and her personal life; this time however there was something different, as she walked into your office you could tell there was something bothering her, something big.
"I was planning on retirement." - She said whit her head down
"W-I... Why, if I may ask?" - You were shocked, your voice trembled as you pronounced those words,she was your i-dol and she was going to leave.
"Well, It's my boyfriend, he... he asked me to marry him and make a family... and I said Yes"
"I see..." There was an uncomfortable silence in the room before you broke up "Your fans will be extremely disappointed you know?"
"Yes, I know... but he's the love of my life and.."
"How can you know?" You interrupted her "Have you been whit more men?"
"Yes, of course!, In the High School I.."
"I see, soy you haven't had another REAL boyfriend right?"
She was silent, her head down and her hands between her legs like a little girl who has been scolded.
"Well I suppose I should congratulate you... and if doesn't work who cares? It's difficult for the children but you can always div.."
"Doctor!!" She was mad, maybe you let yourself get carried away "...That was rude"
"You're right and I'm sorry... I'm sure both of you will be so happy"
"Yes of course... but..."
"But?" CHANCE!! You thought
"Well, as you said, my fans will be sad and that bugs me... I.. I could not sleep well lately"
"Well, I think I can help whit that"
"Really?"
"Of course!, Now watch this coin" You pulled out a golden coin tied whit a string
"Are you going to hypnotize me?"
"Well of course, There's no other way to stop that hassle" You could tell she was hesitant... and she was right to be "Don't you trust me?"
"Of course I do... It's just that"
"Worry not, I'm a professional remember?"
"0k... Let's do it"
"That's it! now don't look away from the coin" You began to swindle a coin in front of her eyes "Now listen to my voice " You are relaxed, all your troubles are fading away whit each swing of the coin; Watching this coin is very relaxing and you will find yourself unable to look away"
She was starting to fall for it, her body was relaxing and her eyes were moving alongside the coin "As you look into the coin you feel more and more relaxed and your eyes become more and more heavy... Yes... that's it I will count from ten to zero, each number will make you feel more relaxed and your eyes will be more heavy and when I finish your eyes will be so heavy that they will shut down"
10...
9....
8.....
7......
6.......
5........
4.........
3..........
2............
1................
0
As you reached that number she felt asleep in your couch, in a deep trance, ready to hear whatever command in your mind   indicates the next chapter needs to be written. |
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