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The orb is left for a teen girl to find. It gives her powers to read and modify the minds.

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Chapter #6

Maggy get's concerned

    by: DrZaaijer Author IconMail Icon
Maggy comes to you and says, "Something is wrong with Willy."

"What do you mean...Did you tell mom?" you inquire.

"I told Mom, but she doesn't think anything is wrong. It's like she hasn't noticed he has changed."

"Changed???"

"He has all these girly things. And have you seen his room?"

"Yes, its very pretty."

"He's a boy, his room isn't supposed to be pretty. He has dolls in his room! Did you know that?"

"Dolls?" you feign ignorance.

"Yes dolls and I saw him playing with them."

"Maybe he's gay?"

"He's definitely faggy, but I don't think he is gay. But that isn't the point, he wasn't like this a few days ago. He just changed all of a sudden."

"Well what do you want me to do about it?"

"I don't know. I don't know what to do myself."

"You you sure its not you who has changed? Have you taken a good look at yourself?"

"At myself??? It's not me, I"m not acting strange he is."

"Look in the mirror."

"I don't see why."

"Just humor me."

"Fine." Maggy went over to the full length mirror hanging on the door and looked at herself. What she saw was familiar, but not herself. Staring back at her was her mother's face. Looking down, she also saw the rest of her mother's body. Then it dawned on her. Turning to you, Maggy said, "You did this to me!"

"Did something to you?"

"You made me into Mom."

"Made you into mom? Haven't you heard all women turn into their mothers sooner or later."

Repeating, "You did this to me. Give me my body back."

"Give you your body? What do you mean, MOM." You emphasized the last word.

"I'm not Mom, I'm Maggy."

"You certainly look like Mom. Do you need something to drink?" You were staying cool no matter what Maggy said. This was driving her even more nuts. But since you had mind control powers you weren't worried that she would hit you.

"I know it was you who did this, now stop and put everything back to the way it was." This time she included Willy in her plea.

"I don't know what you are talking about MOM. Maybe this is the first sign of menopause. I heard women go a little nuts at that time.

"Stop calling me Mom. I'm Maggy. I know it was you. For god sake turn me back."

"You you sure you aren't mom?" You then decided to put all of your mom's sexual memories into Maggy's brain. She could see them one after the other. All of the men before Doug Maggy didn't know but she remembered everything that they did to/with Ellen. Maggy didn't want to think of this, but she couldn't help it.

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