Chapter #5Torch girl by: guy14   Success was something that came easy for you. Ever since you were 14 and invented your first great invention that changed the way doctors worked, saving more life’s in the process. After this you essentially had your childhood taken away from you. So, you could join other great minds in a lab, you spent five years working there so far and even though it sounded bad being young and having to work. There were moments where you got to have fun.
Sure, you had to produce great inventions in such short time frames and having fun didn’t always happen. But you did get moments of free time in which you spent watching your favorite show Pokémon. Upon turning 20 this year you had gotten a new idea for an invention that would allow you to have fun all the time. This idea was sparked from essentially loneliness. Since you weren’t able to make too many friends your own age, you had fallen or more so had a crush on a girl you saw in Pokémon named Dawn. Ever since you saw her in gen 4. You couldn’t stop feeling a certain way towards her. You were smart enough and in the right mind to know she wasn’t real, but still couldn’t help but fall in love with her.
So, you made up your mind that you had to have her. And being the great inventor, you were, you thought that there had to be some way to transfer your life out of this world and into the fictional world of Pokémon.
It took you some time, but you had finally cracked the code and had an invention that just might work under certain conditions. The invention hooked up to a TV and only worked for live time TV programs where whatever episode was on the air that would be where you would end up in the show. Which means in an example if the episode where ash lets his Butterfree is on you would end up right next to him watching his Butterfree leave. You were only really able to test it out 3 times, (since cartoon network announced it was doing a random assortment of Pokémon episode marathon that night) and each time on an episode of friends with a plastic ball, the ball ended up in random spots each time, which meant that even if you enter the right episode you wouldn’t know where you would end up in that episode, you could even land outside a window. And since you didn’t test it on anything living you could end up dead or worse…
But you didn’t care, all you knew is that you made it, so it’s got to work. And since this was your best chance at seeing Dawn you had to take the chance. That whole day you spent getting ready, picking out an episode that Dawn was in, setting a self-destruction timer to the device so no one could follow you in and also finishing up some last farewell messages to the people of the real world. And you ended up finishing in good enough time as you saw that it was 7:48 and the episode started at 8:00. You ran around getting everything ready, you were just going to jump in as soon as the clocked struck 8:00. (But something you didn’t know or count for is that the network was running behind and so the episode that was currently on “All fired up” was going to continue to run for an extra 10 mins) …
The clock struck 8, you jump without even looking, and a goodbye to your old life. Lights flashed everywhere and you feel your body become more animated. Then in a matter of a second you slammed with a bang against a huge thin metal flat surface, you then fell into an opening that had zig-zags of metal around the roof of it, and finally hitting a soft but hard cloth flooring. You were fortunate not to pass out. Then you got up and dusted yourself off, looking around with minimal lightening you saw walls that felt like cushion, giant sticks that looked like giant pens, a flat surface that almost reached the top of whatever you were in that looked like a giant notebook, and then you turn to see a shocking thing giant poke-balls. Seeing this was making you come closer to figuring out where you were and what happened to you. But as you were coming to this realization of figuring out that you had shrunk and enter the Pokémon world an earthquake happens followed by a loud female voice (it was normal to normal people).
You hear 2 loud thuds and then more as the earthquakes begin to slow down, but the loud female voice keeps rambling to herself. The place your in then suddenly moves and then your met with what puts all the pieces together as you look up to see a giant face (https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/poke...). Then with the girl completely unaware of your existence, you are greeted with two titanic track shoes being pushed into the backpack that your trapped in. And then the zipper is shut with a tiny hole in the top, which isn’t big enough for you to fit.
The air around you starts to become toxic smelling, as you look up you begin to realize the bad smell is emitting from the sweaty dirty track shoes. You start to then feel the bag begin to move with the girl carrying it. You try to keep your balance and think that there is no way this could get any worse being trapped in an enclosed space with basically this unaware girl’s smelly sweaty foot sweat shoes to keep you company. And as that thought enter your mind, a clump of dirt that was stuck to the bottom of the girls track shoe lands on you causing you to lose your balance and bounce around the bag till she gets home.
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