This choice: Let's shrink Jiren instead • Go Back...Chapter #5Let's shrink Jiren instead by: revan92   Jiren was alone as usual, méditating on his planet. It was an era of peace, but Jiren always wanted to be stronger to protect his universe. But this day, he was interrupted in his meditation by a presence behind him.
" Jiren The Grey, right ? " Marcaritta, Angel of Universe 11 was standing right behind him. She was a small personn compared to him, but Jiren bent on his knee a fist on the ground, showing the respect an Angel should have. " Ready to serve Belmod Sama " he replied. Jiren was someone totally disciplined, not like many other warriors who would get arrogant even to the Gods if they were as powerfull as him.
The Angel smiled at his submission. That was exactly why she was there after all.
" I know you will always be there for Belmod Sama. But he's not here, and i'am. " She said.
"...."
" Don't you anything to correct then ? " Marcaritta asked, bending over his fac as if she was talking to a child who did something bad. " hmmmmm ? "
" What can i do to serve you ? " Jiren replied, uncertain to know what an Angel could ask from him if it's not for Belmod.
" Well. I needed to talk with the one that Belmod admires so much. I know that you're not a talkative mortal, so all you have to do is to listen to me. "
"....."
" Many Gods fear you and your powers. But Belmod will never do what must be done. Yeah, he won't even if he was enought strong to do it. Can you imagine how disgusting it is for me to hear him everyday talking about you ? " . Jiren raised his head to look at the Angel with an expression she didn't like.
" Yes you got it. You should be erased from existence. But i'm a mercifull personn, and i've planned something else for you. This way you won't be a threat for any Gods or for my relationship with Belmod " She stated before a light came from her cane, blinding the most powerfull guy of Universe 11. All happenned fast, and when the light disappeared, Jiren found himself on his knees in front of a pair of giant feet. A creepy laught could be heard from above him, Jiren looked up to see a giant Marcaritta mocking him.
Jiren few to her head level, lookng at her confused about what to do. But he then choose to attack her with all his strenght by several punches on her nose, which didn't affect Marcaritta who smiled at his futile attemps.She then hits her cane twice on the ground, sending both her and Jiren into her "kingdom", it was like a Divine place but for Angels. Jiren suddenly fell hardly on the ground.
" Oops." The Angel jocked. " forgot to tell you, in my Kingdow, mortals power are useless. Thought that your powers were already useless against me."
"....Why ? " Jiren asked.
" Belmod is mine. I'm sick of you being his only focus. You're just a mortal. And now i'm going to torture, starting by...."   indicates the next chapter needs to be written. |
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