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Chapter #8

Debbie

    by: irrational Author IconMail Icon
Debbie had just spent the better part of the morning gardening, and was quite pleased with her efforts to make the petunias grow. The bright little flowers perked up the garden in her opinion, and she enjoyed the fact that the row of small potted plants were on the side of the garden that faced directly at her neighbor's house, where she had frequently noticed herself being stared at by Nathan, the well-toned, sexy young college freshman that had moved in just that year to stay, while he attended classes at the nearby community college.

While Debbie was most certainly devoted to Steve, it thrilled her to know that she was an object of attention for the young man and she had on more than one occasion let her skirt ride up just a little higher than it should as she bent over the row of petunias while weeding or watering the small plants. The thought of Nathan in his room watching made her feel frisky and on more than one occasion did she come back inside quite hot and bothered, flustered even, at the idea of the young man admiring her body. Meanwhile, that same young man was desperately trying to get out of her way as she walked into the bedroom and switched on the lights, before immediately beginning to undress herself.

On the floor, Nathan found himself scurrying out of the way of Debbie Jordan's feet. The older woman had no idea that he was presently standing between her legs, just a few feet away, by his estimates, from the thumb of her right foot. Nathan had not realised just how small he had become, and as he ran up to the side of Debbie's toes, he realised that he barely reached her well pedicured toe-nail. Breathing in, he was assaulted by the sour musky smell of Debbie's feet, something he had not even imagined before making his foolhardy jump from the ledge of his open window.

His heart began to pound hard as he began to realise the risk the yet oblivious housewife posed to him, now that he was no larger than a Skittle. The thought of her gigantic feet coming down on him, crushing him to pulp like a grape was enough to cut any fantasies about spying on her short and he immediately began to think of a way to get her attention. Whatever had caused him to shrink down to his current size, he knew the only way he would make it back to safety was to get Debbie's attention before she unwittingly turned his body into mush.

Looking back to where he came from, he spotted the paper airplane he had ridden into the room on. Debbie seemed not to have noticed the tiny white piece of folded paper, instead, she had taken off the translucent green blouse she had been wearing, leaving only her bra on, and for a moment, Nathan was once again transfixed by his voyeuristic desires as he watched the mature woman begin to unclasp the strap. The thought of those giant breasts gave Nathan pause and he wondered what to do. The longer he remained unnoticed, the higher the risk of something horrible ending his fantasy but similarly, he had no idea how Debbie would react to finding him shrunk and staring at her get naked.

Torn between just watching the object of his desire undress herself, and finding safety, Nathan decides to...
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