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Chapter #4

The downtown bar

    by: Gruenkhi Author IconMail Icon
Jessica’s heels clicked across the damp pavement of the downtown street, a sound too sharp and rhythmic for the hollow, defeated feeling in her chest. The cool evening air was a welcome change from the stale, hot guilt of the office. She walked with her shoulders set, her small frame a study in tension that no amount of neat tailoring could disguise. She had upheld the structure of her new life, but at the cost of her integrity, and the weight of that moral compromise felt far heavier than her four-foot-seven stature should allow.

She pushed open the heavy oak door of The Blackbird's Nest, the bar she and her friends had claimed as their own since moving to the city two months ago. It was dim, smelling pleasantly of aged wood and single malt whiskey, a cozy, dimly lit sanctuary against the sprawling, anonymous metropolis outside.

Her friend, Elara, was already there, perched on a stool at their usual corner booth. Elara was everything Jessica was not—easy-going, vividly expressive, and utterly uncompromising when it came to fairness. She had wild, dark hair and wore clothes that seemed to defy geometry, an artist who worked as a curator at a gallery downtown.

​"You look like you swallowed a safe," Elara said, not as a question but as a diagnosis, sliding a glass of neat whiskey toward the space opposite her.

Jessica dropped onto the seat, letting out a sigh that felt too loud for the intimate silence of the booth. "I feel like I swallowed my own soul, Elara. Mason fired Samantha." She recounted the events: the HR betrayal, Mason's chilling arrogance, his comment that she was replaceable, and the final, crushing moment when she chose her paycheck over standing up for her colleague.

"He told me I was just there for the 'details.' He reduced her to 'too emotional.' I want him to truly pay," Jessica finished, her voice a low, fierce whisper. "I want to be the one giving him the orders. I want him to know what it feels like to be completely invisible while managing a department he's only capable of ruining."

Elara slowly raised her own glass, her eyes fixed on Jessica. A strange, knowing smile touched her lips.

"That's a very specific desire, Jess. Very specific. And I think I can help you with that," Elara said, her tone suddenly hushed and serious.

Jessica frowned. "Help me how? Are you going to suggest I go back and send an anonymous report to the CEO?"

Elara shook her head, leaning in closer, her dark hair shielding them from the bar's few patrons. "No. I mean literally. I mean giving you what you just asked for. A complete role reversal. You taking control of the entire situation by stepping into his shoes, and him having to face the corporate world in yours."

Jessica scoffed, trying to laugh it off. "Right, like some bizarre, revenge-fueled magical switch."

"Exactly like that," Elara confirmed, her eyes bright and unwavering. "My Aunt Cass, the one who does the really weird anthropology work? She left me a few... unusual artifacts. I’ve never told you about them because they sound ridiculous. But one is a little black Black Swan statue. A relic from a very old, very vengeful society that valued social order above all else. It's supposed to facilitate the enforcement of a deserved hierarchy."

Jessica stared at her friend, trying to dissect the lie, the joke, the trick. But Elara's face held only an unnerving sincerity.

Jessica’s highly logical, detail-oriented mind latched onto the mechanism, but completely misinterpreted the outcome. A statue that enforces hierarchy? It made a strange, twisted kind of sense in the corporate world.

"I’ve only tested the general concept on a rabbit and a dog," Elara continued, her voice gaining a sharp, persuasive edge. "But the principle is sound. The only thing you have to do is take the statue into the office and place it discreetly on his desk. You have to be in close proximity—in the room—when Mason touches it."

Jessica’s highly logical, detail-oriented mind latched onto the mechanism, but completely misinterpreted the outcome. A statue that enforces hierarchy? It made a strange, twisted kind of sense in the corporate world.

"So if I put it on his desk, and he touches it, the hierarchy... reverses?" Jessica asked, leaning forward, her eyes wide with a thrilling, reckless hope. "It would make me the Senior VP and him my office assistant? It would force the universe to recognize that he is an administrative liability and I am the ethical leader the department needs?"

Elara smiled a strange, small smile that held more than a little mischief. "It will absolutely force the universe to recognize the situation you just described, yes. It will make him pay a price perfectly tailored to his cruelty. You taking control is the crucial part. It’s all one equation, Jess. Do you want to fix the problem at the root, or just snip at the branches?"

The meticulous, organized part of her mind, the part that calculated risks and loved a complicated puzzle, saw a way out of her regret. The idea was impossible, but the logic—a magical tool to enforce ethical competence—was irresistible.

"Tell me more about the Black Swan," Jessica said."Tell me exactly what I need to do."
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