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Rated: NPL · Interactive · Action/Adventure · #2257950

The Pokemon world is a lot less friendly when you're a few inches tall. Can you survive?

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Chapter #5

Mountain of a thousand bristles.

    by: sneakyk Author IconMail Icon
(Female pred, violent crushing)
Whooooosh....KTHUD!

The motherly giantess's broom smashes down immediately in front of you with deafening force, sending you tumbling onto your back, giving you a chance to glance up at the object towering before you. What you see is not a view up the woman's skirt, however, but rather a towering wall of bristles! For a moment you can hear painful ringing sounds filling your ears as you recover from the impact. You recover quickly enough to just barely hear a frightful rumble over the ringing. Before you can make any headway, the enormous wall of bristles grinds over your body.

" Oh, I hope they keep in touch..." The woman muses to herself, gazing across the path at Oak's lab, her mind lost in thought about her kids' upcoming Pokemon adventures. RMMMRRMBBLBLE She drags the broom across the doorstep, grinding it right over your tiny body , the broom's bristles mangling, contorting, and scraping at you as you bear the brunt of its overwhelming weight. After the first pass, the woman lifts the broom up... and proceeds to smash it down again, this time sweeping you back. Unfortunately, it seems that she's not just here to clean the doorstep...she's here to pass the time. She'll be sweeping for a while, and if she discovers a little bug sized thing on her doorstep....

The woman drags the broom back and forth, brutally crunching and crippling your body beneath its weight as she passes the time. "Mmm...but I guess I'll have a lot more free time...hmhm...." She slows her sweeping motions as she thinks about the newfound freedom she will have, and instead begins resting her weight onto the broom, sloooooowly grinding it bristles over your already horribly abused little form. "No more cartoons...can go to any restaurant I want to..." She continues her unaware assault on your body. You scream in utter agony as a particularly brutal grind. Eventually, however, she finally lifts the broom up. You attempt to get up and run indoors...

....only to realize that your legs are in no shape for running. Actually, they're crushed nearly beyond recognition. As you struggle to crawl forward, you hear the giant mother speak up once more...but on a completely different subject. "Oh my goodness...what is this..? " She noticed you....could this be your salvation? You cry out for her to help. " That little creature...is it squeaking? Poor thing can't even move" Suddenly you are whacked by the broom and sent tumbling across the concrete. You land on your back, unable to move. All you can do is lay there, groaning in place. "Oh my... it's definitely not moving on its own...I think it's time to put you out of your misery little guy." She says, though her facial expression doesn't at all seem sad. In fact, her lips bear the faintest of grins. For whatever reason, it's clear that at least some part of her is eager to exert her power over such a small creature. "And besides...can't finish cleaning the porch without getting rid of you~

With little hesitation she proceeds to use the broom to bat you around the porch a few times, humming to herself as she treats you like a Meowth might treat a toy. After several bats, you're on the verge of unconsciousness. You let out one final defeated sigh as the woman raises up the broom "Goodbye little one~ " She smirks before sweeping you into oblivion. Your body is ground into a smear. The woman sighs. " Maybe you'll have better luck in your next life..." She muses, squatting down and looking at the smear. She sweeps whatever is left of the bug off the porch and finishes it off with a squirt from the hose.

After a bit more brushing, she manages to clean the doorstep to perfection. She sighs and heads back inside, ready to watch some TV and send both of her kids a flurry of texts as they begin their Pokemon journeys.
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