This choice: Give her a small suggestion • Go Back...Chapter #7Give her a small suggestion by: Zone   They were in public at the moment, even if the corridor was deserted for now. Anyone could show up at any moment and ruin everything. That meant Jaune couldn’t do anything like grope Yang’s chest, even if he REALLY wanted to. It would be wrong, but after all the teasing the blonde girl did to him all this time, it would be perfect payback. Nothing serious, but it would make him happy. So knowing he couldn’t do anything big right now, Jaune figured a small test to try out the power would be acceptable.
“Yang, your boobs itch when you wear a bra.” Jaune told her.
This should be fun. He should be able to notice Yang beginning to feel uncomfortable while wearing one. If she decided not to, he would get a better show. Of course, there’s no way Ruby or Weiss would let her go long without one. Now that he gave the small command, he broke eye contact, and Yang blinked before seeming to snap out of her trance after a few seconds.
“I got to head out, Yang.” Jaune told her. “If you want me to beat you at video games later, that can be arranged.” He figured focusing on Yang’s competitive nature would cause her to not notice any changes at first.
“Hang on, Vomit Boy.” Yang grabbed his shoulder and Jaune was suddenly worried Yang remembered what happened while she was entranced. “Did you just challenge me? The best video gamer on Patch?”
“Isn’t Patch a small island?” Jaune asked, relieved he wasn’t caught. “I’m from Ansel, a much larger town.”
“You may be Ruby’s friend, but I taught her everything she knows.”
“Eh, she can’t beat me, but at least she doesn’t get upset when I win.”
“Huh? She always whines when I win.”
“Is it because you’re a poor winner and rub it in?” Jaune knew about this because Ruby complained about Yang all the time. However, saying it out loud caused him to get punched lightly in the arm.
“It’s on,” Yang told him. “Stop by some time and I’ll give you a lesson.”
“Will do.” Jaune waved as she turned. Then he saw something that made him smile. As Yang turned around, she seemed to adjust her top a bit. It was hard to see for sure, but it looked like she scratched one of her breasts. “Heh, have fun with that.” He muttered to himself.
Jaune would see how much it affected her in a couple of days.
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