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Your worst enemy has become aware of your biggest weakness

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Chapter #5

Smell her feet in front of the girls

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"You've kept up with me so well. It's only fair you get a reward!" Slipping her boots off, Jessica lies down on the ground, so she is a little closer to the beautiful sunbathing blondes. Tugging gently at your lead, she continues. "Crawl over like a good doggie and smell your master's feet!"

"Did she just say?"

"I know! This is amazing!"

Trying to ignore the two girls, you begin to crawl forward but as you reach Jessica's musty and cheesy smelling feet, you can't bring yourself to begin this latest humiliation.

"Now," Jessica clicks her fingers in your face and gives you a very dangerous look. You have no choice.

Unsuccessfully trying to hide a pathetic whimper, you press your nose against Jessica's feet, which are resting against each other expectantly. As you inhale the strong and sweaty scent, the girls who are witnessing this are giggling uncontrollably.

"Oh my god! That is the most pathetic thing I have seen in my life! He's a complete bitch!"

Avoiding their eye contact, you stare into Jessica's face. She is smirking triumphantly at you. With every sniff from your nose and comments from the sunbathing girls, she becomes increasingly pleased and dominant.

Jessica teases you: She begins to move her feet to the left and then quickly to the right, forcing you to change direction and miss her feet completely. You grimace but continue sniffing, but this time her feet curl into the ground, Bending down low, you move your nose to meet them but end up sniffing dirt as her feet move on top of your head and rest their momentarily. Wishing you could be even further in the ground so it swallowed you up completely, you feel tears spring in your eyes.

"I'm sorry doggie - I was only playing! I'll let you sniff my feet again," Before she gets her feet back in position she stares at you expectantly. "What do you say?"

You hate yourself for being so pathetic, especially in front of attractive girls, but Jessica owns you completely. What can you do? "Please," you murmur.

"What's that?" Jessica grins at you.

"Please, please!" You whimper.

Jessica sighs with mock resignation, "Oh if you have to. Go on - you may sniff my lovely feet again."

As the laughter from the other girls increases, you hear Jessica giggle a little too. Her eyes light up as though she has an idea.
Sniff her feet Three times the embarrassment!

You have the following choices:

1. Sniff her feet

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2. Three times the embarrassment

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