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This choice: your high school biology teacher  •  Go Back...
Chapter #9

The big rider pulls up

    by: fat_hiker Author IconMail Icon
The rider is broad-shouldered, and as he draws nearer you can see, underneath the long, dust-obscured coat, that he’s strong and fat - very fat! Up close, he has broad shoulders and heavy arms above a thick, solid chest, and a belly that bulges out over the saddle. The rider pulls up near you. He looks a lot like your high school biology teacher, Mr. McEwen - strong cheekbones, red hair and beard - except that this rider would make two or three of Mr. McEwen.

"Ahoy there, (IYNH)!" says the rider in a loud voice exactly like Mr. McEwen's. "Are you lost, lad?"

"Umm, well, yes," you admit. "Are you Mr. McEwen?" you ask the big figure.

"And who else would I be?" the rider replies in his commanding voice. "Your parents are looking for you," he goes on. "Do ye ken your way home? But of course not," he continues, "or you wouldn't be out here lookin' lost and your parents wouldn't be searching for you. Look, lad,...
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You have the following choices:

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1. your home is about an hour's walk that way," he points.

2. haul yerself up here behind me and I'll see ye home."

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