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Making your little fantasy a reality. A Star Technologies Affiliate. Additions welcome.

This choice: Fight  •  Go Back...
Chapter #7

The Loop

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Well, thanks to the miracle of the high-tech Tachyon Tag, what do you have to fear?

You turn and prepare to face the monstrous snake.

You hear a shockingly loud hiss as the monster opens wide its flexible jaws.

You feel yourself paralyzed with fear. You're quivering as the snake closes the gap of distance. Maybe you ought to beg Kevin to intervene.

You begin twisting your head looking for the giant. "Kevin! Where are you?"

Suddenly, your hear an even louder hiss. You turn in time to see the snake strike, its open jaws lunging with lightning speed to snap you up.

It's so quick you have no time to react. The jaws close and you feel yourself pushed down the snake's long body. The snake's muscles constrict around you, forcing you deeper into the snake's tunnel-like body.

•••••

"Kevin! Where are you?"

The hiss causes your mind to blank in fear as you turn and see those huge jaws rushing forward to snap you up.

You are quickly pushed down into the snake's gut by the creature's powerful muscles.

••••••

"Kevin! Where are you?"

The loud hiss reduces you to a quivering heap. "Something's not right..."

The snake's jaws rush forward and snap closed around you.

It's a quick trip into the snake's gullet.

••••••

"Kevin! Where are you?"

A loud hiss warns of the snake's sudden strike. "Nooh!"

The jaws snap closed and you are pushed down by powerful muscles into the snake's gut.

You're still barely conscious. "When does the Tachyon Tag..."

••••••

"Kevin! Where are you?"

It's the strangest sense of terror blended with deja vu. You've lived this moment already.

The jaws snap closed. You are forced into the giant snake's stomach, praying for the Tachyon Tag to take effect.

You're completely unaware that the small amount of damage caused when you dropped the device has trapped you in a temporal loop. The Tachyon Tag does pull you back from death, but only as far back as the instant before those deadly jaws snap closed.

Again and again, you are swallowed and consumed, only for the Tachyon Tag to pull you back to the moment of the giant snake's deadly strike.

"Kevin!" You scream in utter terror. "Where are you?"

The jaws snap closed...
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