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*Poseyv*Item Title: The Thorn and the Rose

*Poseyp*Author: Alan Philips

*Poseyb*Type of writing: poetry

*Poseyv*Reviewed by: *Paw* Lisa Noe*Cat2*

*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello Alan Philips, I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary, I'm going to give you a detailed review today in order to aid you in becoming a better writer. "Beauty is in our Words"
This is a beautiful poem I think you did a great job writing it.
It has a very good and appropriate title, The item description is well done, I think it is listed under the other genre which is a good place for it. The poem is structured using four stanzas of six lines each.
and has good rhymes. the following is my favorite stanza because i like that it hides its tears.
*Poseyb*excerpt from writing:

By thorn allowed
as days grow long,
the rose takes centre stage.
At end of year,
it hides its tears,
when views its empty cage.


*Poseyv*suggestions:
I saw no mistakes, you did a good job writing this item.

*Poseyp*conclusion:

thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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