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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Hi S.E. Mabson!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: Those girls were creepy enough in the Shining! You are not helping their cause! *Rolling*

Spelling/Grammar: I found only one spelling/grammar error for you to consider:

1. In this section - before we try to find then a new family - you may want to change "then" to "them".

Readability: A short and entertaining read!

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to ponder.

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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