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 Not the Right One for Me Open in new Window. [E]
love did not work out slight poetry
by Kat Author Icon
Review by Lovina Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Kat!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: I am not the best at reviewing poetry, I only know what I like or what speaks to me. Yours is a sad and hurtful little poem with an interesting format.

Spelling/Grammar: I found only one spelling/grammar error for you to ponder:

1. In this section - You’re not hear with me to finish - you may want to change "hear" to "here".

Readability: A well written little read.

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to consider.

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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