| Hi Jacky! Overall Impression: Oooh, an ending with a twist! Very nice! Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! Readability: A well written and entertaining little read! Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to consider. Write on! Thanks much, Lovina **Image Unavailable** ![]() Your work was rated using the guidelines from:
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