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*Balloonp* Welcome to WDC androgynous!


Your poem with its appealing topic popped up on Read and Review so I couldn't resist a peek at your view of Ghosts! *Delight* What a unique idea!

Beginning with a question is an effective way of engaging the reader as we can agree or disagree with your response and you give us your answer up front. The surprise is your interpretation! It is a different point of view. I really get the connection with the word and your suggested definition. Wow! *Thumbsup*

I would put a colon in the second line as the proceeding lines give the examples of how the ghosts are memories. *Wink*

I had to smile at the switching pops! *Laugh* It is common to be embarrassed at being caught out at anything! The romantic image about love's glow is lovely too.

Short and sweet free verse that makes your point vividly! Thanks for the vision and something to ponder. *Starstruck*

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