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Review of I Love You  Open in new Window.
Review by Cadie Laine Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Introduction~
*NoteP*          Cadie here reviewing for Building Emotion Lesson 2.

*AsteriskV*NOTE: This review is only the opinion of one author. This review is meant to help and NOT hurt.

Personal Impressions~
*NoteP*          This piece was easy to read. You showed me what the characters were feeling well.

Tone, Mood, Point of view~
*NoteP*          The assignment was to change the point of view between the characters and you did that well even using the asterisk to show that you changed characters.

Plot, Conflict and Structure~
*NoteP*          The characters are opening up to one another in their relationship. Moving quickly after dating for only 4 months. I understand falling in love fast, you have to remember they came from a toxic relationship before. Does that not play in their mind? Maybe not.

Characterization and Dialogue~
*NoteP*          Your characters interacted well with each other and the dialogue between them moved the story forward.

Conclusions~
*NoteP*          The continuation of the story makes sense. The couple seem to be moving closer together. Good job in this story.

*NoteP* Thank you for sharing and Keep Writing!


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