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Hi, staiNed ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() First Impression: This entry gives the readers something to think about concerning trees. One person's experience with trees help those who have never been in a forest or seen a real tree to understand their importance. Suggestions: There are some technical problems with this entry. However, I am suggesting the author expand this entry into a long essay that goes into more detail and description about her personal experience with trees. I like: The way the author taught her children not to be afraid of the forest. Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this entry because of the author's personal experience. Write on!
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